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Flamin Barz 01-24-05 03:53 AM

Sanity Lost
 
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173264

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173295


To my girl/ex:I know we had our problems and you couldnt take it now more but please girl i want you to know i love you

So many Things were promised - i wanted to Show ya the Ring-
Slowly we Bring the end - all because ya didnt Owe me a Thing-
My Souls Crushed cuz of my debts - Im sorry i didnt Hold Much-
Its a Gold Rush with the warmth of ya body to my Cold Touch-
Missin ya Smile n ya beatiful voice - I wish i could Listen Awhile-
Always Diggin my Style but to you im now nothin but Shit in a Pile-
Wrong in Position - i realize that but its to late to be On the Attention-
Now ya Gone n im Missin you so im writin this Song for the Friction-
All will Be is friends - i know we miscommunicated with fights Oftenly-
But Possibly we will be later in life but please accept my Apology-

To my Peeps:Yo to my mothafuckin dawgs i know i brushed yall off more than i should of but deep inside i wanted to ride man...but it was the family guy talkin to me lol

I know to yall i changed and i wasnt Around for Shit -
But i was tryin to be a man stayin Down for my Bitch-
Always had ya back it wasnt like i would Leave ya to Die-
It was hard for me i had no tears - I now Bleed in my Eyes-
We was brothers and yall know that - never get it Twisted-
If i heard some1 talkin out they neck they was gettin Fisted-
Listen it's very hard sometimes to keep Things in your Life-
But i tried my best to have it all but it kept Bringin me Strife-
I got to the point i couldnt take it and i wanted to End it All-
But every time i put the ghat to my head Friends would Call-
So yeah i will admitt it yall - my woman did Soften Me-
2 u all i got ya backs 4ever just please accept my Apology-

C-Bo 01-25-05 03:16 AM

feelin this shit here...shit was dope...it was deep too...nice flow, creativity, etc...nice drop man...9/10

Flamin Barz 01-25-05 01:23 PM

thanks dawg - uppin this - dont sleep on this shit

Flamin Barz 01-25-05 03:31 PM

uppin this shit again----------------------------------------

Ysdat 01-26-05 01:25 AM

good solid drop, emotion is nice. good structure. keep dropping
return the feed.
~inside the mind of a maniac~

Flamin Barz 01-27-05 01:42 AM

thanks man - uppin this here - i want more feed back on this


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