archiedx vs OG_STATUS
 

Here r da battle rules:

6-14 lines
no recycling
no biting
no hate votes

minimum posts 2 vote: 75

4 votes r needed 2 win

check-in by no lata den: 1-25-05 at 7 p.m.

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

archieDX has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 10:39 AM.

OG_STATUS has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 10:43 AM.

fucc but here it goes...chea, check it

wut ur name is archiedx u sound like an action figure//
if i put da red dot on ur knot dat'z a real good picture//
ur no killa only thang u kill is a plastic blow up doll//
when it flattens u claim how u knock down her walls//
u neva can compare wit me lyrically cuz my style is way 2 clean//
cuz whateva u go folks r quick 2 spray at u like afro sheen//
like big daddy kane i always get da job done//
i'm not ur dad but i bet u'll look up 2 me like u were my son//

Enter Arch Dark: The baddest
fuck your "OG status"
y'see cus, your just a puss,
-and you look the fattest
u gettin fucked on the regular
no-rep? then im beggin ya
never step to a vet, be very wary
scared of ghosts?*
arch is very scary
and very hairy, aint fraid to die,
the dead scare me?, why?
can't catch fright,
i make many moves @ midnight
manifests in vests for chest and toast to bring light
im not playin,
cast or blast you through the astral plane
heard what im saying
arch dark insane,
my mind thinks... kinda strange
i'll see you on the other side
if your souls got the range

*OG is scared of ghosts! check his posts

ooops i didnt check the line limit otu, sorry, my bad!
but my lines are 1/2 the size of yours tho

This was feedback posted for OG_STATUS
 

you ripped this whack dicksucker but i can't vote................

Voted For: OG_STATUS

I vote OG for better structure..easier to understand and better punchlines...archieDX had more "lines though" and he focused his rhymes on the personal about Og afraid of ghosts so that goes to him but basically OG won this battle wit better
punches
structure
flow
... return fav y'all!!

Voted For: OG_STATUS

ok...
wasnt feelin either.
arch ya shit rhymed,but lines were hella short n i cudnt spot a punch...
og....yours was beta structured...n at least u attempted to make a punch n try n use sum wordplay...overall og wins coz he had the beta punches....jus keep elevatin...

return honestly
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Voted For: OG_STATUS

Oh my god! I think i have seen the worst verse in an RV battle ever. ArchieDX, i am not usually one to hate that much but that was the wackest of the wackest of the wackest!!!!!!!

open: OG
close: OG
structure: OG
flow: OG
personals: OG
punches: OG

Archie you need serious help man

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RTF please. and i will do the same for you other guys battles

Voted For: OG_STATUS

i think og got this battle for throwin better punches one punch i definatley .iked was this
u neva can compare wit me lyrically cuz my style is way 2 clean//
cuz whateva u go folks r quick 2 spray at u like afro sheen//

that was pretty dope dude the closer was pretty hot too

archie i dont think u came really strong man ur i didny really like ur drop at all ur best lien was

can't catch fright,
i make many moves @ midnight
manifests in vests for chest and toast to bring light

only ok thing in ur verse man
i think u could be dope im tryna elevate jus like u man

v/og

can you guys vote on the battle in my sig wit death thanks

Voted For: OG_STATUS

nice hits dawg you won man
hits og
structure og
vocabulary og
archiedx werk on ya structure its fucked dawg anyway keep it real peace

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This was feedback posted for OG_STATUS
 

checkin out da pollz...seeing if dis a good battle or not...

This was feedback posted for OG_STATUS
 

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