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Tha Sickness vs mista_auth3ntiq
Battle Rules:
6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting NO D/R VOTES .. happy mista_bitch? topical - last prayers crew battle - LC vs. Jury Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-26-05 at 08:03 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 08:41 PM.
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Tha Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 08:58 PM.
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when i roll out wit tha crew, i know my return may be denied
i dont wanna know that my girl cried, cuz her siolder died so i put my hands together and i look towards tha sky and pray to tha lord that on this day i do not die 'dear lord if you choose to lay my soul to rest on this day i shall accept my fait, but please dont take my life away' 'i need just one more day, to say what i gotta say, to my brother i gotta tell my girl i love her, and show love to my mother' im not afraid of death, you cant take my life if you please im just askin fo a day, before my ashes are blowin in tha breeze this is my final prayer, a plee for life ima need the hand of god... to remove this knife..... |
Tears coming down my eyes, as I quickly change personality My own girlfriend pointing a gun at my head, hand is shaking furiously I’ve broken her heart in pieces, like an rose has lost beautiful pedals I’ve split her heart in 2 like sandals, I treated her dirty not like an gold medal On my knees, my lungs are like an vibrator, shaking. I was in a havoc of fear Thinking, if she pull the trigger, everything I done when I was alive, will disappear Her eyes red, she was angry, furious, like the devil. If I’d talked she would turn into Satan I hit her, more times than Roy Jones, been hitting a boxer. As I rethink, I felt so ashamed I put my hands together, started saying words, I felt like I was talking in foreign language I was praying, telling god to forgive my sins, begging for my life, I didn’t want my brain, a spinach I started saying “sorry”, though that will not help, she has so much hatred on me, deep in her layers She puts the gun in my mouth, like a dick. My lips quivering, she looked me in the eye, Your last prayers? |
Lmao..................uppin For Some Fucking Votes Holla At Cha Boi...........
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This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
uve locked dis up nicely fam...:thumbup:...........uppin 2 get dis sorted
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Voted For: Tha Sickness
aiii yall im jus checkin up on this battle that they said was closed but i see its not Removed |
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Nooooooooooooooo Im so sorry thats suppose to be a Feedback im sorry itll cancel itself bcuz its to short n e way
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Anyway, uppin. I'll pm strobe......................
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This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
checking the polls
goodjob mista............... |
Thanks Valor........................................
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Voted For: Tha Sickness
you got this one man one sided multis the gfather hits gfather vocabulary gfather structure gfather yo mista you could work on all ya shit aight good job god fatha Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
by god father i mean the sickness aight my niggas keep respectin the game mutha fuckas
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