MaRVJay1009 vs CounTREE Jay
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 01-25-05 at 02:29 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

CounTREE Jay has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 01:57 AM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 02:18 AM.

look.....

dis not ya lucky-day,so afta u get hit wit da pumps-we-spray
"pussy" u'll b hangin from "da branch" datz whut i call a "CUNT-TREE-jay"
no u wasn't on da phone with ya wifey fam...u dis like bitches
only time "change- skins" u tryin da "veiw dis site different"....
go reach 4 my crown im squeezin pound n u meetin da ground
ya moms a hoe she like "homeless ppl" do alot of "sleepin around"
ima make sure dis prick's ghost....i'll doubt u'll even make dis shit close.....
out in "Ny" u da "HERB dat be on da sideline" like da "knicks coach"
but if u really puttin grams on da block..betta keep ya hands on a glock
i'll kill ya "grandmother" by beatin her ass with a "grandfather-clock"

nuff said.....

explinations..

first bar=in his profile he in a crew called DA BRANCH..and i just fliped his name PUSSY ON DA BRANCH....CUNT-TREE JAY

second=bar..when i mean CHANGIN SKINS i mean gettin different pussy if u dont get it dont vote

4th bar=i dont know if ya follow da nba but da knicks gota new coach named HERB WILLIAMS....u'll get da punch

aight.

I eat these commercial Mcz for dinner, but I don't even really like tha beef,
If your bark is worse than your bite, somehow you musta lost your teeth.
Prolly tan from all the sunnin'z, so I know what you did last summer,
1009 a tribute to the girls you spit it at, just writin' random numbers.
Another NYC M.C., confusin' hip-hop wit tales of comin' from the gutter,
Stay talkin' bout toast, and can't believe your shit still ain't butter.
Lines can be long and heavy, mine still ahead by years of light,
Name COMICal, only 1 Jay that makes niggaz MARVEL on the Site.

Too lazy to write anymore, let's just leave this shit at that.

-CJ-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

ite heres da breakdown
Punches=countree(both had reasonably good punches)
wordplay= marv(you flipped his name but the punch was shit)
personals=countree
structure= tie
im giving it to county coz i thought his verse was stronger.. both werent ill but they was ite. by da way marv wtf has killing his granmother wit a granfather clock got to do wit dissing him?? ask yaself that lol

Yeah, Uppin'............................................ .................................................. ...........................


-CJ-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

This aint a hate vote. I wanted to vote for Marvejay cos his verse was dope and i wanted to show im fair. BUT then i read countreejay's verse.........

MarveJay: Some real good multis and metas with a lot of hard hitting punches. Your vocab was good and flow was cool. Strcture was good, i think some lines only stetched cos of the bold text. Your biggest problem was you tried too hard to get the multis in your punches lacked in power and this is a battle not an open mic. Nonetheless a real good verse, giving me second thoughts as to whether i ever wanna battle you. lol

best bar: "go reach 4 my crown im squeezin pound n u meetin da ground
ya moms a hoe she like "homeless ppl" do alot of "sleepin around"
-This was cool


Countree Jay: Im not that familiar wiv ya work and i seen you floating bout RV and i must say you are fucking dope!!!! Metas coming in quick, your punches were out of this world! some real hard hitters that were all on target with some cool personals. Structure was cool making it nice flowing, easy to read and enjoyable.
-One day im gon be this good.

best bar: "Another NYC M.C., confusin' hip-hop wit tales of comin' from the gutter,
Stay talkin' bout toast, and can't believe your shit still ain't butter."
-aah nice one!

uz a real hater fam its sad..........................................

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

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Uppin'.........................This............... ......................Shit...........

-CJ-

Uppin'.........................This............... ......................Shit...........

-CJ-

Yo, Uppin' my niggaz and niggerettes....................................... ............

-CJ-

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

DEFFINATELY HAD BETTA OUNCHES...A LIL STRECHED BUT DEY WAS STILL HOT NIGGA...I GIVE IT 8/10



RETURN DA LOVE NIGGA

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Yo nigga, i don't like you, you stay droppin' unexplained votes in my shits. don't post a vote if you don't know how to asshole.

-CJ-