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my mental capacity is Like
E= the speed of light speak or type beef or bite atoms get smashed whether we shoot or fight fuk a punchline you know tha rules its do till i die you want to be comic muthafuka you better sit tight fa real you better off signin up for tha comic view cuz fukin wit me it strip down to ya birthday suit i want cheeda cheese like big poppa So give me tha loot yo watch and yo chain we loot and wait on tha stoop (Gangsta) yeah youngin i spit saliva touch ya leave you cold quick walking tha ave ignant like you a older bitch 20 minutes fa $5 just tryin ta find tha magic stix ya crew roll around damn my mans had a cervix you better swerve swift before i make the earth shift ya peak tip bay bay and the kids followIn tha drip you get clipped hole in ya face you just cant sip wishin ta god that you could go get a face lift this aint kanye west more like witches of eastwick leave you C-sick cranberry vomit somebody help shit |
um wtf is this....? half of it flows so good it dont flow right...wtf....i aint even gonna start on this
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I would class this as ok.
To make this good, all you have to do is stretch your bars out. for instance: you muther fuckers better know my mental capacity is Like
science I split the atom, i figured E= the speed of light everytime im in the room,your scared to speak or type so fake you kick back and just beef or bite Im a human bomb,so watch your atoms get smashed Im gonna win whether we shoot or fight I spit raw and real,fuk a punchline I break them,while you know tha rules hip is in my heart,its do till i die your rhymes are funny,like you want to be comic feel me? You have to fill your bars out more, so it actually makes sense. keep dropping.return the feed. check ~inside the brain of a maniac~ |
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