....lost in contemplation....
 

freetype shit~

feelings, meanings, beefing, slaying.
relaying emotions, stealing and praying.
dreams occur and blur with reality, time stands still.
blazin spliffs shit is a haze, fucken don't seem real.

you muthafuckers only know me on the net
my closest and dearest don't know me yet
yet you think you have the god given right
bout givin advice, an sayin what you like
i gotta life, family, school, you know nuthin bout
cant see on a screen my mom holla an shout
does anyone care about this goddam shit
text shit matter to you when ya say ya feelin it?
yall know fuck all bout shit all of yall
i do this shit fo my benefit not any of you
i aint pro poet or emcee, or a vet of RB
you prolly dont give a fuck about bout my life or me
but fo yo info im 15, heterosexual, male,
white, a lil crazy but never been in jail
from the UK goddamnit, dont speak like da queen
school 5 day a week, where aint known as guillotine
could say no hate to enemies, that would be lying
if da truth hurts, yall be bleedin, dying.

feelings, meanings, beefing, slaying.
relaying emotions, stealing and praying.
dreams occur and blur with reality, time stands still.
blazin spliffs shit is a haze, fucken don't seem real.

Luvin this ...
dope ish ..
Vent dat anger ish!

Props

you muthafuckers only know me on the net
my closest and dearest don't know me yet
yet you think you have the god given right
bout givin advice, an sayin what you like


text shit matter to you when ya say ya feelin it?
yall know fuck all bout shit all of yall
i do this shit fo my benefit not any of you
i aint pro poet or emcee, or a vet of RB
you prolly dont give a fuck about bout my life or me


Fac Lines ^

Keep spittin da real,

pz
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this was good, felt tha emotion here.. ..nice opener, flow was good as well.. ..

"feelings, meanings, beefing, slaying.
relaying emotions, stealing and praying.
dreams occur and blur with reality, time stands still.
blazin spliffs shit is a haze, fucken don't seem real."

lovin tha hook, probably my favorite part from this.. ..

"could say no hate to enemies, that would be lying
if da truth hurts, yall be bleedin, dying."

could've been worded better in my eyes, but i feel what you sayin kid.. ..keep spittin


¤DoS¤

i love this lit..
 

homeboy you got a God given talent from what this piece displayed..keep it up..and push far beyond expectations...good job..truly so far on the net..since i been on these rap forums(few months off-on)..you the only one..that really stands-out..keep it up kid!

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I am the only one, LMAO

but thanx 4 da replies

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a real good venting piece for sure....raw and emotional....erm.... - i guess i wont give 'advice' to ya...erm...even though when i do drop advice like ish....its more like just some personal ish that might help...not so much a patronising piece of advice or something... - ....anyway...its all good...i know where ya coming from...respect....

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