"DEADBEATS" YO PEEP DIS SHYT
 

yo i let my gun explode hear da decibales of your heart /u exhale and exal to exile in hell so u miles of well hail me now/ yall decipals for me and my pals yo doubble xl boubble jacket thug as hell /bandana handheld automatic bitch bow down/ my arsenal ill leave u in ash the remains of your ass /dust and powder shits smelling sour corpse devourd how the fuck god allow it i myo c u in heavin wit a hello acting mellow/ fuck that heated heavy legendary like makaveli and john gotti /fuck every body i get crunk when im drunk leave a body in the trunk punk/ ean/ my brigade be paid millions made the arch addict 4 everyting immaculate /my watch be flooded fuck my foes they be blooded/ im that young thug who dont give a fuck in the back of my boys ride getting high/ x rateing exagerating waiting on motherfuckers waveing my 45 fighting 4 respect just to prove im alive /ready 4 war wit the handgun and the maskon wit my mind gone /hanging out the passangers side door screamming fuck yall and OUTLAW/yo check my metemorphisis went from suffering to nothing to nuffing niggas /to the biggest gorilla type blood spiller /i aint no motherfucking mob figger pulling trigers im straight thug nigga /contaminating all your buildings /poluting blocks wit my regiment /illigetiment dealings going on
/shells litter when we hit em up im seeing glitter/ ranting rhetorically fuck all authority /i want the dirtyest album on the market so yall bitches can mark it parental advisory explicit content/ yo act wild and draw a crowd never surrender getting loud/ i aint no motherfucking coward

yo dun sleep on da ni66a gimme some feed bacc YA HEARDD!!!

UNO

difficult to follow this post because of the block nature of the text. apart from that, i couldnt catch the rhyme scheme and there didnt seem to to be a topic, just agression on paper. i think you should pick a specific subject, the more original the better and push your rhymes in that direction to travel towards illness.

this was nice drop yo!! keep it coming!

fav line-
check my metemorphisis went from suffering to nothing to nuffing niggas

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stay elevatin

Yo, i see where you gettin at wit this one, i caught the rhyme scheme, plus i like that "agression on paper" shit. you know what i mean.

Keep it gutta, theres not alot of us baby....