"The Struggle" - by SEVERE an artist off my label......this is his single....
 

ups for feedback..............................

Beat.Didn't like it that much. To slow for me.
Flow. It was on, it's just str8 g-unit style.
Lyrics. Sound like every mainstream dude, dice caps an homies....
Delivery. Had it down, jus sounded like G-unit.

Overall what u make isnt bad, it's jus been done.
Im not into that Ima Thug I came up rough shit. No offense.

Not Bad Tho. Jus be original