2 Proove I'm Not All Club.....
 

iight check out my new song on my page... its called "Dreams" it explains how i feel about life and people at school and all that shit....


www.soundclick.com/jayjking


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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1922539


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...2571post1922571

Listening...beat is nice...flow is pretty good...quality is on the down low...your vocals are way louder than the beat...do you use cool edit? Other than the quality, this is a decent track...keep it up...Return the favor, "If I Die", link in sig...we're collabin on this beat thumbup:

yup....well i just hit up ya link...thanks for the feed........good looking out....pzz 1...start writing to that beat i am

yea sorry bout tha mixing too i mean i got mixed up with it.....i wasn't really feeling like mixing and yea i use Cool Edit 2.0.....i can mix real good...but i wasn't in the mood then.....

Nice beat, tune down the vocals some, delivery is ok, flow is different but it works. To me it got kinda uninteresting halfway through cuz I had to listen close to make out the lyrics in it, but it's decent overall.