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Rewind
I get out of ma bed and im walkin to ma car.....
n by far i knew it was night becuz of da starz.. So im driving while the skyz gettin brighter.......... Smoke goes in n out of mouth n fire goes back in da lighter...... Im gettin outta ma car n outta da trunk i grab da shotty......... im runnin n i start seein blood goin back into a body........ lookz like some guy was dead, shirt was all red....... N outta now where five bullets fly toward me from his head.... so im runnin wit a gun in, ma hand da plan..... was to kill a man form japan cuz he killed ma fam..... Well now im in a room n a chick walk in......... Numbers are erasing from a paper as dis chicks talkin.... N im smackin her ass while she suckin ma shit........ den cum flies off of her face and into ma dick... And as shes talkin some shit a bra fly right on her tits.... now im walkin wit dis bitch ,im real full n i spot a store.... a guy pushes me n i notice its da same guy i shot before.... Im in da store store spittin snickers back into da pack its funny..... N i felt like a dummy, cuz afta dat i was hungry.....(i was on drugs n everything was backwards)uppin dis 1 |
Improve ya grammar nigga.
Make words longer. Do me a sig. Improve your structure. Do me a sig. Get yo mojo on point. Do me a sig. Improve your vocab. Do me a sig. And thats how i feel you can improve. |
up your vocab an complexity it was basic...
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