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(0-0) .Mictorious. Vs One M.B (0-0)
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check..................... :thumbup:
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Check .... And Good Luck
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||..Clench your Teeth when I punch this Da-Chiller… I’ll just have to Rip You-Iller…Besides .Mic. Overcook This One like a Forgetful Griller..
||..Like 'Conflict Between Animals' I Clash-Cats! Yur Nothing But Past-Stats.. 'Hiding Secrets From Within' Like A Crack-Stash!! 'Club Records' And Bash-Facts Since I Got Yur 'Life Passing Before Yur Eyes' Like A Fuckin Flash-Back!!!... ||..Yur Skills Ill? No! Yur Wack? By Far-Dork.. Kid Around And Get Poked Cuz My Bar-Forks! 'No Ones Seein Yur Shots' Like A Dark-Court!! And Yu Going The Whole Ten Yards? Ha! Yu One Yard-Short!!!... ||..I'll Makem-Tear! The Spits-Yu-Fear.. Come With Punches? First Make 'Em Hit-Yu-Queer! Gimme My Space; Or Get Lit-With-Years(Lightyears)!! The Last Licks-Are-Near Since I Got This Man Sayin 'Oh Baby!' More Than Britney-Spears!!!. |
a rap catastrophe attack the wackest geeks this kat is bashed 'n weak actually, ya tracks wouldn't be dope if ya mic was stashed with weed i'm burnin ya son, still ya returnin the love buy quotin my shit claim ya doper than this.. cmon, you know ya own spits, kid focus a bit im nice 'n i'm raw, wanna be violent, i'll stick a knife in ya jaw dicin a whore, so hopefully you cant talk shit, let alone write anymore leave this bitch ta medics, spits like 6 or 7 ripped schitzophrenics all over the place knocked into nova 'n space the kids shits hysteric |
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28/40, 2nd bar i thought fell off( i really wasnt feelin it) but other then that some decent punches from bars 1 n 3... good drop one......... . . . ||..Clench your Teeth when I punch this Da-Chiller… I’ll just have to Rip You-Iller…Besides .Mic. Overcook This One like a Forgetful Griller.. ^^wasnt multi.......3/10 ||..Like 'Conflict Between Animals' I Clash-Cats! Yur Nothing But Past-Stats.. 'Hiding Secrets From Within' Like A Crack-Stash!! 'Club Records' And Bash-Facts Since I Got Yur 'Life Passing Before Yur Eyes' Like A Fuckin Flash-Back!!!... ^^didnt connect.....5/10 ||..Yur Skills Ill? No! Yur Wack? By Far-Dork.. Kid Around And Get Poked Cuz My Bar-Forks! 'No Ones Seein Yur Shots' Like A Dark-Court!! And Yu Going The Whole Ten Yards? Ha! Yu One Yard-Short!!!... ^^........ok multi's but stretched bad...5/10 ||..I'll Makem-Tear! The Spits-Yu-Fear.. Come With Punches? First Make 'Em Hit-Yu-Queer! Gimme My Space; Or Get Lit-With-Years(Lightyears)!! The Last Licks-Are-Near Since I Got This Man Sayin 'Oh Baby!' More Than Britney-Spears!!!. ^^ok werdplay, but still missed in my opinion..5/10 . 18/40.............way to stretched to really have good flow, to choppy fam, but concepts are ok, jus wasnt feelin much from the way you worded things...... . overall im going with omb in this battle, multi's n punches were better . vote#1 |
^^ just to help him, out
"i'm burnin ya son, still ya returnin the love buy quotin my shit claim ya doper than this.. cmon, you know ya own spits, kid focus a bit" theres 2 sets of multis, one has 2, the other one has for "i'm burnin ya son, still ya returnin the love buy quotin my shit claim ya doper than this.. cmon, you know ya own spits, kid focus a bit" just to let you know there were more tehn 3 sets of multis there |
ight mayne this is a good battle... nice use of multiew in both veres... imma break it down,
.mic. i thopught your verse was cleverly put together but i think u tried too hard to fit the disses in the multies, i thought some of your lines didn't make sense which is what i thought brought down... apart from the bad things you had some decent punches and multies... overall i thought your lines were a bit too stretched but your verse was ight... 7/10 omb. that was a nice clean verse... flowed well and your multies and punches killed him... there isnt much i could say about your verse really becuz there wasnt really anything wrong with it... the only thing i'd say was wrong is the flow was a bit choppy in the middle but you picked it back up again... nice verse. 8.5/10 good verses from both of you but omb got it on the flow and the punches.... not to say the multies as it's a multie battle, keep elevating or do what you do and no hate... pz. v/ omb |
ok not only was ombs struture 100 times better his flow went way better when using multis you have to flow them you cant just throw random words that rhyme itll fuck shit up omb also had better punches which i guess aint much cuz its a multi league but it helps the multis to sound better when they lead to something so overall omb gets my vote
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3-0 One MB so far...
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wow i wish i was in this league.. but Kon forgot me.. ugh.. but vote goes to OMB his flowed nice.. and he actually had good content in his multi's unlike mictorious.. v/omb
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well not much to say...u need to structure ya verse better and not try to cram ya multis... a rap catastrophe attack the wackest geeks this kat is bashed 'n weak actually, ya tracks wouldn't be dope if ya mic was stashed with weed ..good flow very clean, nice punch i'm burnin ya son, still ya returnin the love buy quotin my shit claim ya doper than this.. cmon, you know ya own spits, kid focus a bit .....ehh decent punch , coulda been better im nice 'n i'm raw, wanna be violent, i'll stick a knife in ya jaw dicin a whore, so hopefully you cant talk shit, let alone write anymore ...lol like the second line, nice multi's leave this bitch ta medics, spits like 6 or 7 ripped schitzophrenics all over the place knocked into nova 'n space the kids shits hysteric good ender overall omb wins this because he knows how to flow and structure his multi's mic ya verse was better suited for a reg battle __________________ |
... One M.B. Won .. Oh Well .. I Guess I'll Fix My Style .. Cause Ya'll Don't Now How To Read It ..
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5-0 One MB
OMB's new reocrd 1-0 Mic's new record 0-1 |
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