Integra vs New Era
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-27-05 at 08:18 PM

Must drop verse in 75 minutes after check in.

InTeGrA has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 07:00 PM.

New Era has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 07:03 PM.

Homie you've just got exposed, like a bed without a "matress"
No wonder you rap like the next B2K "Actress"
I run this shit everyday like i'm "King Of The Hill"
A "birth control pill" was something you failed on "affording"
quit the rap game, go back to your "hobby" skate "boarding" with the great "T.I.P"
Even in the holiday inn "lobby" it's obvious why u never got a "D.I.P"
I got the guerilla warfare, like a European wild boar runnin on "fours"
I'm always open in the camera, unlike your congested "buttholes"(2likewomen)

Before you vote, this is the thread that proves TI skateboards.
http://dirtysouthrap.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1583

upping for votes comon people vote
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Voted For: New Era

new era u won dis battle...but haven't u upped our battle?? aneway..integ ya second bar didn't ryhme king of da hill and affordin...dont go da getha fam

opener-era
structure-era
punchlines-era
creativity-era
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-nun
finisher-era
enjoyed-era...he just came harder than u integ...ya first bar was good then afta dat u fukked up

RETURN DA FAVOR or u a bitch

i'm "King Of The Hill"
A "birth control pill"

that was part of hwat I said

Voted For: New Era

New Era

I said im pretty tight why can't you coward's see
each line is defined you bitein hard like babys begining to Teethe*
Nice. I loved the humor. 10/10

You gotta stop im comeing threw ya with skill's of poppin shit
Fuck a integra weak cause you blow up when taking massive BODY HITS
Didn't really get it so it must have been dope. it flowed well. 9/10

You a herb exspecting to feed while i expirtease my personal blows
break you're bones, you stay playin wit phones while im harder than stones
Nice flow and the punch landed perfectly. 10/10

Put a heata toasta that will roast-ya straight to integra's chest
You Got no skill's in this world you're like 50 accualy tryna dress
Sounded played. Very played bar. 5/10

I wont come at you wit my best, got guns ill put a mac to ya ronald
And make you tell more " Fat " " Lie's " Than that bitch Rosie o'
I liked it. Nice closer. 10/10

You had a nice verse. Over all you had=44.
As a good emcee you should know not to brag about ur skillz in a battle. Tip: Take that shit out.

Integra

Homie you've just got exposed, like a bed without a "matress"
No wonder you rap like the next B2K "Actress"
Don't know what that was all about. 5/10

I run this shit everyday like i'm "King Of The Hill"
A "birth control pill" was something you failed on "affording"
quit the rap game, go back to your "hobby" skate "boarding" with the great "T.I.P"
Even in the holiday inn "lobby" it's obvious why u never got a "D.I.P"
Not flowing wel.. Some of it didn't even rhyme good. 5/10

I got the guerilla warfare, like a European wild boar runnin on "fours"
I'm always open in the camera, unlike your congested "buttholes"(2likewomen)
Weak closer. 5/10

You could of got alkot more props but he more taalent. over all 15.......................

Vote/ New Era

RTF Please.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174159

Voted For: New Era

I have to give it to New Era for actually not making me throw up and adding a single punch to his entire verse. Both really sucked though, but NE just wasn't as bad really. Both need to work on everything, alot, read some tutorials fa real. You need to find out what a punch actually IS because you are both very mistaken on that. But other than that

v-New Era

Voted For: New Era

Homie you've just got exposed, like a bed without a "matress"
No wonder you rap like the next B2K "Actress"
I run this shit everyday like i'm "King Of The Hill"
A "birth control pill" was something you failed on "affording"
quit the rap game, go back to your "hobby" skate "boarding" with the great "T.I.P"
Even in the holiday inn "lobby" it's obvious why u never got a "D.I.P"
I got the guerilla warfare, like a European wild boar runnin on "fours"
I'm always open in the camera, unlike your congested "buttholes"(2likewomen)

I felt all in all your verse was sloppy- flow was sacrificed in many spots- punches were so so- you had some nice shit- but most of your lines were very fillerish... not great for text-- might sound good audio though.

I said im pretty tight why can't you coward's see
each line is defined you bitein hard like babys begining to Teethe*
You gotta stop im comeing threw ya with skill's of poppin shit
Fuck a integra weak cause you blow up when taking massive BODY HITS
You a herb exspecting to feed while i expirtease my personal blows
break you're bones, you stay playin wit phones while im harder than stones
Put a heata toasta that will roast-ya straight to integra's chest
You Got no skill's in this world you're like 50 accualy tryna dress
I wont come at you wit my best, got guns ill put a mac to ya ronald
And make you tell more " Fat " " Lie's " Than that bitch Rosie o' donald

New Era- I think u shared some of the same problems ur opponent-- you both chose some simple rhymes-- yours had a better structure to it, made it easy to read... your punches as well were off in most spots... however even though ur best punches were kinda basic like 50 tryna dress I think u were more effective... vote New Era.

This was feedback posted for New Era
 

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good drop integra


i'll up this for yall

oh...i could leave feedback on this one...


um, new era, u came hard with punches, i think u took this one. i had some nice personals in there, and u had good structure. i think u should work more on ur vocab, and wordplay, and mix all that in one, and u can be a doper head...
integra...u had a nice verse also, but i dont think u came too hard. some of ur puncehs didnt land that hard, and i wasnt feelin ur structure, and ur all around verse. elevate fam...but u did have some good mettas in there, but i dont think u won this one...i dunno...my shit dont count.
overall-new era got this one. he was more original, and creative...