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Dex 01-27-05 06:59 PM

MaRVJay1009 vs The Dex
 
Battle Rules:

10 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 01-30-05 at 06:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. more than 5 battles open

System 01-27-05 07:00 PM

The Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 07:00 PM.

System 01-27-05 07:05 PM

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 07:05 PM.

MaRVJay 01-28-05 03:10 AM

ur okay but dis cat meaner..admit it u luv when dis kidd text
u aint da "glass cleaner" so dis battle u aint gon "WiN-DEX"...
ya flows is just 2 gay who care whut beats dis quer rap 2
when u do shows in da uk..ppl do like ya "avy" & "throw chairs at u"
im sick with it...bitch get it my flows u hoe's is luvin it......
...............i merked ya crew dont get it "TWiSTED"
im like "george bush" now cuzz i "own da GOVERNMENT"
ya basic chump! u'll get wasted cunt i got chrome 8's n pumps
u'll b able da have ya own "back" when they take ya "front"...
i got guns niggaz in da "MaTRiX" want..trust me da heat blow..
ya moms suck my dick all day dex i call her "KNEE-HOE"..*neo*
u betta off spittin da ringtones...im grippin da thing home's...
im in da "UNiTED" states wit ya girl n she givin da "KiNG-DOME"
get it UK...a rap career? dex 4 get it ur a lame with weak text
chances of u winnin wasn't even "HiGH" when u was "WEEDex"

nuff said...if u dont get nun of my shit dont vote....

FIRST BAR-u know da glass cleaner called WINDEX...u'll get it
SECOND BAR-look at his avy he probly gon change it..but it got a dude liftin a chair like he bout da throw it
THIRD BAR-he's a crew called twited government..
6TH BAR-he's from da UK...da united king dome..and when i say she givin da king-dome i mean givin me head
LAST BAR- his old name was weedex..u'll get it

Dex 01-28-05 06:12 AM

Promise you il win this and be happy chaps
Two words why…………….Battle stats

Il say no more of it til the end of the verse
But just remember......he called me out first

Cast your eyes over this, be sure to take notes
This path Marve chose wen he gave me hate votes

MarveJ Coming out of this ravished and savaged,
Clapped like the rest of his crew whos “established”

That’s bullshit, bein repped by Miooc and Version Three.
I aint Matt Hardy but im the Version One of RV

Now to the reason ive won this battle for sure
Il tell you while Marve picks his face off the floor

Cos hes complacent or maybe he didn’t know
Clever like Steve-O cos you can only hav 5 battles open
----oh no

GKillaz05 01-28-05 08:36 AM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009 - Good spit man, you had some good wordplay, and a good flow, wit hard punches.

Best Line - ur okay but dis cat meaner..admit it u luv when dis kidd text
u aint da "glass cleaner" so dis battle u aint gon "WiN-DEX"...

Worst Line - i got guns niggaz in da "MaTRiX" want..trust me da heat blow..
ya moms suck my dick all day dex i call her "KNEE-HOE"..*neo*

Dex - Good spit man, punches were pretty good, and ya had a good flow.

Best Line - Promise you il win this and be happy chaps
Two words why…………….Battle stats

Worst Line - Now to the reason ive won this battle for sure
Il tell you while Marve picks his face off the floor

OVERALL - Good battle but I gotta vote for MaRV, he had the better flow, and wordplay. Sex work on some more creative shit and wordplay. Stay Up.

Vote - MaRVJay1009

M-Eazy 01-28-05 11:16 AM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

this battle was nice...marv had some nice flows....he won this with punches and better rhyming and mettas. he killed him on tha first bar, but it was kinda worded badly, but still killed him. i think he couldnt came a lil harder on his structure. lines werent stretched, tha all around flow just didnt seem right...

dex-u came a lil too soft to take this. i think ur punches were good, but not all of them landed. yo personals were ight, but a lil simple. i wasnt really feeling ur verse, thats why i couldnt give u my vote. but no hate, u got skills, i just think u should elevate more in your punches, and learn how to word them, so they could come out good for a text battle...

overall-marv took this one in my vote. he came a lil more prepared and dropped a lil harder.


plz return tha favor on one of my battles in my sig...and plz return it, cause i took tha time out to vote on this...


.good battle..............1................

MaRVJay 01-28-05 12:22 PM

uppin 4 more votes

MaRVJay 01-29-05 01:49 AM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnn nnnnn


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