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Van Ished 01-27-05 09:41 PM

Pair-A-Dyce (ft Devastator)- Automatic
 
Since my nigga SPuL asked me to get active, I'm goin to go through my soundclick and post my songs once a week or somethin.

This is an old joint I did with my brother redid my part bout a month ago to improve the quality but my brother has been in Iraq for the past year so his quality is still blah.

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1983950&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1983950&q=Hi

Download:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down....cfm?ID=1983950

Know-Gimix 01-28-05 12:30 AM

first cat was iight.... good delivery, not very fun to listen to though. just too repetetive for me, u dont switch up or nothin on it... second cat... kinda dissapointing cuz you flow just like the first cat only your mic ettiquette is worse, lots of sssses and little pops that hurt the quality for me... im listenin lo fi so its probly worse than mp3- 1st guy comin back? either way its soundin better again, flow gets a little more interesting than before... not bad all in all, just could use some different sounds in there to break it up... keep droppin...1

Artemis 01-28-05 08:58 AM

weerd, man, stay active. :)

as for this joint, I liked it. Yea, yo bro's quality kinda bad, but when he get back i guess he can get shit better. Yea, you have pretty tight lyrics on yo verse, and yo bros is nice too. Nice beat. lol weerd... and yo flow, yea, it's nice, but try changing it up at points. like you could first drag words for like 4 bars, but then start goin' faster, or shit like that. But yea, overall pretty nice track. good listwen. pc 8/10

50Cal. 01-28-05 02:24 PM

I Think Its Pretty Good Fuck A Quality Who Really Cares?shit Is Decent Nice Lyrics Good Flow And Shit As Well Try To Add A Lil More Energy Though And Itll Be Straight


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