Life vs The Late Show
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Due tomarrow night 11:00pm
LOSER CANT RAP HERE FOR A MONTH
3 vote KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-31-05 at 05:19 PM

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The Late Show has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 05:20 PM.

Life has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 05:22 PM.

work ho's, though this first line is a filler
The Late Show aka Life serial killer
unlike Life, i'm still ghetto, rhyme and run a knife
got his dime out her "stillettos", he been everywhere "but her fly"
im sick at rappin like when Em puked before the battle
patiently waitin, Late dont move before he half to
speak fast, i rap like some don
"i'l beat yo ass" and this fag thought it was a come-on
stay away from rap, get back to rock and roll
fuck this battle, i'll let you rap topical

i made an exception this time, cuz i dont battle a dude thats openly gay
i will spit your head in half with an a.k anyday

you cant see me dog,i spit hot shit, thats it
nigga riding Jay Lenos dick

this dude named should be charcole cuz all he do is get fried
you should have retired the same day Johnny Carson died(no hate)

Voted For: The Late Show

yay your first ever battle you might win, lalalalalla who cares you have my vote

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This was feedback posted for Life
 

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Voted For: The Late Show

i made an exception this time, cuz i dont battle a dude thats openly gay
i will spit your head in half with an a.k anyday
weak.....

you cant see me dog,i spit hot shit, thats it
nigga riding Jay Lenos dick WEAK.......

this dude named should be charcole cuz all he do is get fried
you should have retired the same day Johnny Carson died(no hate) WTF that was foul and it wasnt even good....

weak verse un-strcture, weak punches, no effort no flow, no noting was working for u * and thats the truth no hate *

dont ever go weak like that again......
.5/10 yes that is a 0.5 outta 10.0



work ho's, though this first line is a filler
The Late Show aka Life serial killer
come on now u dont need much to win.... weak start

unlike Life, i'm still ghetto, rhyme and run a knife
got his dime out her "stillettos", he been everywhere "but her fly"
haha yup that did it GAME OVA U WON....

im sick at rappin like when Em puked before the battle
patiently waitin, Late dont move before he half to
ok..

speak fast, i rap like some don
"i'l beat yo ass" and this fag thought it was a come-on
wow..gay and wasnt good...

stay away from rap, get back to rock and roll
fuck this battle, i'll let you rap topical

decent ending.....

better verse, more focus, better strcture, flow aight, and not a bad verse from a noob...

6.0 outta 10

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Voted For: The Late Show

didnt really know where to go wit dis battle....but i give it to The Late Show even tho his structure was a lil fucked...he still had a better overall verse...life i aint really like ur closer....ur verse was a lil too simple...
vote/late show
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