My Nigga.........
 

ta my nigga youre the reason im herre right NOW//therefore i couldnt picture myself doin anything but holdin you DOWN//we rappin NOW//and all there left ta do is put the clamps on da CROWN//never anything stop what we DOIN//
this BOND// is BEYOND//what beef could RUIN//dis goes back ta when we was KIDS//we was thoro i didnt think GOD could FORGIVE//for sum of the shit that we DID//as time passed we got bigger and OLDER//started keepin guns in da HOLSTER//made us a lil bit BOLDER//niggas knew not ta fuck wit me or you for fear of catchin one from dey head ta dey SHOULDERS//we been through all the GAIN//and the PAIN//and all its done strengthen our GAME//and taught us it more ta life than the flippin of CANE//and poppin them THANGS//no more grindin and CRIME//well we lil niggas that will cum wit TIME//when i become a man i want a house kids and a WIFE//outta LIFE//and my mind and money RIGHT//
and we usin dis rap TALENT//could hav IT//if we work together ta get at IT//...............................

c'mon can i get some replies

Yo, thats got some good imagery but tha barz could be arranged a lil more neater. Nice piece tho, keep sptiin

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c'mon can i get sum replies