Lifes on the Line Remix
 

If you want beef,nigga,ya lifes on da line
I wanna strike wit a nine but my knifes on my mnid
Since Im nice wit a rhymes,now Im twice on da grind
and if ya talk shit,one spray,ya lifes on a time
Yep,fuck wit Mix,he put yo ass ta rest
and after shit crack,it seems like cars crashed ya chest
So fuck a bulletproof,dese shellz'll slash ya vest
and if you survived,you still didnt pass da test
So I trash da rest til all of em six feet unda
lay yo ass in da street and get rolled on wit da Hummer
I come wit sick shit dat change dese rappers into plumbers
Dont confuse yaself,yall niggas is not stunnas
If Young come out ya mouf,betta be talkin bout da Gunas
Ill have da best sayin" damn,those is nice linez dat he wrote
My fame right now is higher than a C-note
So niggas stop knockin em cause yall cant rock wit em

My verse to 50 Cents CD Get Rich or Die tryin-Lifes on the Line

now see dat was a whole lot better but
when it comes to gangsta shit,it has to be
really creative,becuz to me,its like played out
but it was decent,widen yo vocab i like da rhyme scheme
you had going on tho
over all
7.5/10

thanx man
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I dont even know how ta drop links dawg
but was dis good for a 13 year old?

Thanx fa dat dawg
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Is anybody here?If you are,gimme feedback please

it was alright, like the multis but im not feelin allt he gangsta shit, i mean it suits the song but you can rpa about somethin else to, nah mean? decent drop

Thanx fa dat man
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IM 14 Yrs Old And I Also DonT think that youre Good for your age LOL No really Though I think You couldve done betta age is not a Object in the rap game unless your 40 LOL But N e ways Stay up And active mayne and you will elevate
peace

Ok then
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