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Keln WiTz 01-29-05 09:30 PM

.:: Lost Ghost ::.
 
I walk through the wet, the rain plastering hair to my skull,
as I shed memories to sweep away this dark day's dull.
Memories as I played games, observing the grinning face of my little boy,
Shadows sweeping happiness away, dark hands shredding joy.

I walk through the wet, though I still remain dry,
as I think to a sunnier place, and say my goodbyes
to the people I once loved, as now I walk as a ghost,
devoid of the moments that I still miss the most.

I walk through the wet, yet dry in my hand is a picture frame.
As my families souls were reaped, as death lays his dark claim.
I remember the arson's devils work and the life-taking fire,
sending flying souls above to add to His Heavenly choir.

I walk through the wet, reminiscencing momentous moments,
like Kodak commercial pictures, with saddening components.
All of it's forever gone, and by the hands of a single man,
of the simplistic souls that can still sweep joy from this desolate land.

I walk through the wet, mostly dry like I'm crossing through time warps,
as my eyes recall these happy days through the lifeless eyes of a moving corpse.
The burnt-out remains of a house awaits me down the quiet road,
beckoning me to the ash, packed with old memories that my mind also knows.

I walk through the wet, thoughts flitting through my crowded mind,
of smiling children playing and my wife's lovely grin, painfully kind.
I may be six feet under, but I still walk on two feet in this sad place,
where I'm bound to the restless results where my life was lived, along with that laughing face.

Keln WiTz 01-30-05 09:49 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1928624

Keln WiTz 01-30-05 12:23 PM

Uppin' for some feedback. o_O

Keln WiTz 02-01-05 04:33 PM

>< Uppin', damnit.

*GHOSTE* 02-01-05 04:53 PM

this was a fiya drop...i gotta give it at least a 9/10...flow was flawless...so was the structure...and ya didnt go into any cheezy/wannabe metaphors...u had a good rhyme scheme and all ya lines made sense...nice topic too...

Keln WiTz 02-01-05 06:32 PM

Thanks, man. I've made up some strange topics in my time: a robot who is the minion of people who took over earth and it's thoughts, and a story of a dead person who has to remain in hell in return for helping his friend not commit suicide but he does so anyways... :D Maybe I'll post 'em some day.

Keln WiTz 02-02-05 04:14 PM

Uppin' for some feedback.

Keln WiTz 02-04-05 07:06 PM

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