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Final Destination
hard to live even as my eyes receivin n jus readin this...
cant find da definition of life...i guess mines meaningless... who supreme in this?..if i died who gets da greivences... i say we all jus fucked...without da soap or da penises... poof ya gone in a instant..right after u got into princeton... before cops got u in prison..heart stopped u lost all ya vision... darkness orbits ya eyes..u'll die dont try its all a surprise... if i was u i'd be like cats dyin of AIDS n start ya goodbyes... life could be over so go to sleep n u might fall in a coma... this life wont let ya 'Win-Free' unless ya karmas like Oprahs... vains gettin thin n pains gettin grim as ya days dim at their brim... invincible cuz u swole?..God'll lift ya soul like u do weights at da gym... dont be careless..cherish every moment before u perish... be scared of God..be like Robert n be followed by a Parish... death can diminish ya worth..but i think conviction is worse... i know i'm next..n i have a feelin i wont finish this ver... |
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this was nice man, some good multies you had in there. Some good creativity too, nice flow and structure, the drop was good, 9/10
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readin this and...
hard to live even as my eyes receivin n jus readin this... cant find da definition of life...i guess mines meaningless... second line was real dope^^^^^ this was overall a pretty good drop man..feelin the flow, emotion in it is nice...the vocab is good...lyrics feel deep to me, pretty good...overall this is a dope piece man...keep droppin!! |
^^no doubt...uppin..................................
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OMG i think im Bout to Cry LOL ..............BUt N e ways Im Feelin Like everybody Else feelin And thats that ya opeing Really Was good and ya Ending Was perfect ya body lines were good so Ill give ya a 9.5/10 Bcuz you didnt Really come wit soem good Vocab to keep up wit that Level That ya verse was on
But Still I Terrific peace Stay Up |
thanks for feedback...uppin.............................
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