DoContinue vs xcell
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feeding...
lets go

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 02-02-05 at 03:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

xcell has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 02:51 AM.

i got 1 day 14 hours 12 minutes and 19 seconds to drop my VERSE that means he got that much time before hes in his HURSE hes got no ABILITY no UTILITY to even sign on the INTERNET hes got no INTELECT no shit in his life to REFLECT on docontinue is the next bitch im SICKED on hes gettin PICKED on the clocks tickin down before his lifes COMPLETE chearish evry moment dont COMPETE cause if he posts his shit ill make him OBSOLETE cause U and ya whole CREW are like pharelle SHOE ya ICE CREAM none of ya posts get read cause i make'em dissaper call me VISENE

DoContinue has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 11:38 AM.

aight... sorry it took sooooooo long for me to drop... lol my bad

lunch is off, this jive hoe actin like he can hold
ya punches soft but i'll bet 'five votes' they leave you 'K-O'd'
u on some 'lame computer shit' and it's easy to tell
ya losses is 'off the chart'... you cant 'microsoft excell'
we throwin you in 'jail' ......on a wack hoe charge
named himself x-'cell' cuz its the only way he got 'strong bars'
this man is 6 and 26!!! damn, need i say more
you get raped in ya 'cell' and you still gettin whored
wit 26 losses, how do you keep yourself unnerved?
might as well travel wit paper plates the way you be gettin served

in case u didnt know, there's a microsoft excell program u use to make charts
and ass you can plainly see, he has 26 losses, finna be 27

This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 

not even gonna vote, but xceel, mang, your structure is fucking fucked....honestly docontinue won, but i didnt feel like explaing my vote, so o well....

ummm ^^^ that was hilarious... too bad that ur too lazy to vote... oh well... Uppin!!

This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 

this wasnt as good as ur other shit, but this kid deserves rookie of the month so far

Voted For: DoContinue

V/Docontinue......gets my vote he came harder in everything punchs personals vocab.....wit better structure....X u need to work on ur structure u had sum good lines but ur diss's didnt feel like u were dissin him hard an they werent that creative.....no hate jus elavate....
punchs=Do
vocab=Do
structure=Do
opener=Do
closer=Do
overall=Docontinue
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

uppin..........
this is bogus how it has to be 50 char...

Voted For: DoContinue

this was an 1-sided battle all da way out 4 me:
opener: docontinue vocab: docontinue
structure: docontinue punches: docont
personals: docont multis: docont
closer: docont
docontinue took my vote cuz he came harder & hit wit more lyrical punches in diz battle; xcell u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & don't stretched dem out so far
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: DoContinue

ok normally i would break my votes down but the other guy's structure would take too long so you know what....docontinue get's this one because he actually had punches and not indescriptive ramblings bunched together in a virtually unflowable(unflowable....) way.

v/docontinue

kid is dope im tellin ya

Voted For: DoContinue

X, Structure your flows alot better, i could barely read your stuff man, but from what i could make out of ya verse, it was half decent, few okay multies, no real creativity or humour in ya personals, an you need alt of eleation in your stucture, its like your verse was just 1 whole line, an thats not good......

D.C Ya verse was sick, had some real hard hittin personals an punches, an you connected the build up too your hard pun, real nicely, ya got this one easily

RTF

Peace out

Voted For: DoContinue

i hate voting for battles like this one where it was completely one sided... xcell you have 26 losses dont you think its time to elevate by now.. i mean damn.. youre not good.. you cant rhyme your structure is a paragraph and you have wack punches bad meta's and no flow at all...

docontinue you obviously won this one i dont think i need to say anymore on this battle

Vote: DoContinue