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....Gone.... 01-30-05 04:21 PM

Please Girl
 
some quick shit, not my best, i just had to let it go......





I’m sorry, about the way I treated you
When you walked out the door I went blue
Girl my heart wasn’t in the right place
writing this, to tell you I’m a change man
I felted like I didn’t have a rose in my garden
After each day, my heart like an bread it softens
Sitting by the phone hoping you’ll give me a call
I’ve walked in a love ditch, without looking I fall
Baby girl, please I still believe in you and me
I want to make this relationship like glue, sticky
My life is on a brick wall, I just cant move on
Without you my day’s are not like the sun
All I see is gray clouds with tears falling
It was sweet having you, but the bee’s stopped humming
Like a picture of you in my head, I just cant forget you
My pool is green, you gone, my life is forever blue

PS.JANIEA “I LOVE YOU GIRL”

fluidmoon 01-31-05 06:57 PM

aww, yea, i feel you on "just having to let it go", nice work here man, some emotional yet, sweet words, hope everything works out, nice job on this..stay up.1

DQ 02-11-05 02:56 PM

Awwww...this is mad cute, emotion was strong and I love those short drops that come straight from the core. Hope everything works out for the better but this was definately sweet. Keep it up fam...

DQ


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