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trifecta vs M.A.F.i.A
Battle Rules:
6 or less barz No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-02-05 at 04:29 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
M.A.F.i.A has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 05:12 PM.
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ok....
Ha ha...try to come in here...swingin to start fightin.... i "de-baited" the fish hook...this dumb fucks still "bitin".... when I spit this…he will try to remember how to spit back… Beatin me ? bouts as much chance as getting an elephant through a cat flap… i tapped on his shoulder...sign on his brain said " out of order ... too busy trying to put MnMs in alphabetical order"... niggers out of breath...end of this he will be dead... decievin name...this cunt couldnt lie str8 in bed... this whores gettin served for chattin like a certified vet... comin in with "hi im a fuckin herb, i havent posted yet"... |
Trifecta has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 05:57 PM.
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ta define ur skill mayne, its gangsterly impossible/
Your raps are more cartoony that "KIM STOPPABLE"/ dont fuck around, dont even try ta step wit me fool/ Ill dround u in less than 10 seconds in my swimming pool/ Tool u up, hammer u up leave traces all across you/ COPS still find ur body but dont appear to give a fuck about u/ UR rhymes, still stand undefined/ dont know why, i try, keep wastin my time/ Battelin ur ass just dont seem right/ u beat me once, aint goin down again/ Cuz ur rhymes are inreadable alls i recieve is tention/\ So know im tha best and next time pay attention/ |
uppin for votes.................. lets go people dotn sleep on this
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Voted For: M.A.F.i.A
yall this is a whack ass battle, im not even gunna vote on it just wanted to let ya'll no dont battle untill you elavate.....peace |
Voted For: M.A.F.i.A
I vote for MAFIA.. i liked ur lines.. combining comedy with skill.. u had good flow and everything was rounded nicely.. trifecta said some decent shit but too much corny shit that i pretty much saw coming.. overall.. vote mafia |
This was feedback posted for M.A.F.i.A
rightttt... well ur verse was fuckin garbage AND u said niggER...u must be white or jus a nigga whos WACK...either way....
SHUT THE FUCK UP !...i cant even vote on this shyt now cuz ur so GARBAGE ! |
Voted For: M.A.F.i.A
you won this easyli seriously, u had better punch's, better vocab, Trifecta's verse wasint that good, Structure: Both Vocab: Mafia Flow: Mafia Punch's: Mafia i tapped on his shoulder...sign on his brain said " out of order ... too busy trying to put MnMs in alphabetical order"... lol i liked this bar Vote: Mafia |
Voted For: M.A.F.i.A
Ha ha...try to come in here...swingin to start fightin.... i "de-baited" the fish hook...this dumb fucks still "bitin".... ^^good wordplay and all....but where's the punch?...1/10 when I spit this…he will try to remember how to spit back… Beatin me ? bouts as much chance as getting an elephant through a cat flap… ^^unoriginal........2/10 i tapped on his shoulder...sign on his brain said " out of order ... too busy trying to put MnMs in alphabetical order"... ^^Played out since the early 90's. niggers out of breath...end of this he will be dead... decievin name...this cunt couldnt lie str8 in bed... ^^weak.......2/10 this whores gettin served for chattin like a certified vet... comin in with "hi im a fuckin herb, i havent posted yet"... ^^weak...2/10 Whole verse was weak man.Flow and structure was ite.No much of a problem there.But punches lacked.That brain outta order/M&M's line..I can't believe you spit that.That's been played out since the early 90's.I first heard that in elementary.Be creative next time. ta define ur skill mayne, its gangsterly impossible/ Your raps are more cartoony that "KIM STOPPABLE"/ ^^Terrible...terrible....0/10 dont fuck around, dont even try ta step wit me fool/ Ill dround u in less than 10 seconds in my swimming pool/ ^^No punch...0/10 Tool u up, hammer u up leave traces all across you/ COPS still find ur body but dont appear to give a fuck about u/ ^^flowed bad...weak punch....1/10 UR rhymes, still stand undefined/ dont know why, i try, keep wastin my time/ ^^No punch...0/10 Battelin ur ass just dont seem right/ u beat me once, aint goin down again/ ^^ugh...don't bring up him beating u...1/10 Cuz ur rhymes are inreadable alls i recieve is tention/\ So know im tha best and next time pay attention/ ^^no punch...self glorifing...2/10 OK...had too many killin/violence threats and self glorifing.Just diss.It's ok to use the threaths and glorifing as filler or set-up...but not as a punch.And the actual punch you had were whack.You can't just go stating stuff and expect to get a reaction.Be indirect Vote-MAFIA RTF BELOW OR THIS vOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203538 |
This was feedback posted for M.A.F.i.A
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for M.A.F.i.A
Yo kid, i admit you have some funny stuff, but you lost some flow there in the middle. You rhymed two words with themselves "order", and I don't even know what you're second to last line meant. the only close to personal you got was the "brain out of order" and the last line, which may or may not be true. You got work to do.
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Voted For: M.A.F.i.A
better vocab, better punches, better wordplay....overall better verse..and ya first line was funny.. V/M.A.F.i.A |
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