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Dex 01-30-05 10:10 PM

Dex vs Ear Ational
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding
No Hate Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-01-05 at 10:10 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

System 01-31-05 12:20 PM

Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 12:20 PM.

System 01-31-05 12:22 PM

Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 12:22 PM.

Dex 01-31-05 12:22 PM

So im a homo english fag? but HE be dressed in drag
Only get successful on the front of GAY Monthly mag

Ational got plenty great male “friends” that stay at his place
Cant let him die without a “Will”, cos there sure aint a “grace”

Start beef with Korn or Slipknot, still wont have battles that rock
Even if you on fire, you aint hot, too busy wiv snap crackle and “pop”

Ear Asked for “friendly” beef, but I aint the laughing cow
Your verbally reduced to mincemeat, whos laughing now?

System 01-31-05 01:40 PM

Ear Ational has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 01:40 PM.

Wet Willy 01-31-05 01:41 PM

twizted government.........shit it sounds like a club for sex
its like were playin his cd tha way everyone is hittin the dex
go back to lab and write betta lines, i didnt think u were so slow
cause dex's punches are bout as animated as his cartoon show
this battle aint a mystery by my skill remains a clue
no-one likes our government so whats that say about your crew

Kawn Flixx 01-31-05 01:52 PM

Voted For: Ear Ational

So im a homo english fag? but HE be dressed in drag
Only get successful on the front of GAY Monthly mag
weak....3/10

Ational got plenty great male “friends” that stay at his place
Cant let him die without a “Will”, cos there sure aint a “grace”
pretty okay 7/10

Start beef with Korn or Slipknot, still wont have battles that rock
Even if you on fire, you aint hot, too busy wiv snap crackle and “pop”
WTF? 2./10

Ear Asked for “friendly” beef, but I aint the laughing cow
Your verbally reduced to mincemeat, whos laughing now?
jesus christ worst rhyme scheme ever 1/10

Dex be much more complex seriously,you had liens that
were like freestyles and not online freestyles..like
when you in the lunchroom just sayin shit for no reason.
Elivate fam for reals.
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twizted government.........shit it sounds like a club for sex
its like were playin his cd tha way everyone is hittin the dex
hittin the dex,bad setup good punchline tho.7/10

go back to lab and write betta lines, i didnt think u were so slow
cause dex's punches are bout as animated as his cartoon show
a bit childish,and didn't realyl diss him Lol..animiated is GOOD
4/10

this battle aint a mystery by my skill remains a clue
no-one likes our government so whats that say about your crew
no meta or wordplay but...made sense still
7/10


Winner=Ational

New Meth0d 01-31-05 03:40 PM

Voted For: Ear Ational

wow......this battle goes to Ear ational because he threw a punch and some personals, ....i mean dex had an attepmt at wordplay and tired to play of ear's sig but it wasnt really a punch, basically era came harder with more witty and creative lines i liked the hittin the decls/dex line

V/ ear ational for better punches and personals

Ike 01-31-05 07:04 PM

This was feedback posted for Ear Ational
 
checkin polls...................Ear should win this easy

Dex 02-01-05 11:55 AM

cool. now the dickriders have visited on to the voting j/k

Wet Willy 02-02-05 06:25 PM

uppin this shit.... vote on this foo's and drop a link i will return da favor..honestly

~Lady Fiya~ 02-05-05 12:28 AM

Voted For: Ear Ational

short but sweet battle... i'm really feeling this props to both you.. aight BREAKDOWN:

~EAR RATIONAL~
i must say you have the best opener:
twizted government.........shit it sounds like a club for sex
its like were playin his cd tha way everyone is hittin the dex
^^was feeling the nameplay, flow and nice punch to start the battle off... 7/10

go back to lab and write betta lines, i didnt think u were so slow
cause dex's punches are bout as animated as his cartoon show
^^effective personal lMao @ Dexter's Lab omg, nice wordplay my goodness.. this was a hot bar, nice punch 10/10

this battle aint a mystery by my skill remains a clue
no-one likes our government so whats that say about your crew
^^an aight closer, nice tie wit politics and his crew name, not bad for a finisher.. i say 6/10

23/30 (76.6%) ---you had a solid 3 bars, your opener was hot as well as your second bar.. you had some effective punches, and creative personals..

Dex:
So im a homo english fag? but HE be dressed in drag
Only get successful on the front of GAY Monthly mag
^^^an aight attempt for a personal... not a good punch nor opener.. 5/10

Ational got plenty great male “friends” that stay at his place
Cant let him die without a “Will”, cos there sure aint a “grace”
^^first half was aight, nice flow in this bar but the second half is played as ever... 3/10

Start beef with Korn or Slipknot, still wont have battles that rock
Even if you on fire, you aint hot, too busy wiv snap crackle and “pop”
^^bar is stretched.... had a really good flow until mid-way the second portion... first half played with rock and rock stars, and the bottom half was wack... 1/10

Ear Asked for “friendly” beef, but I aint the laughing cow
Your verbally reduced to mincemeat, whos laughing now?
^^not the best closer but prolly one of your best bars.. it was the most creative than the others, but it wasn't hard-hitting 6/10

15/40 (37.5%)- i expected you to come way harder than you did, you had some pretty played lines, that's one of the reasons you lost this one.... the other is that you had NO effective punches, you had good set-ups for punches but they just weren't there..

v/ Ear Ational

.Ike. 02-05-05 01:16 AM

This was feedback posted for Ear Ational
 
was gonna vote......not enough posts.......Ear Ational got this one easily though.....

50Cal. 02-05-05 01:19 AM

Voted For: Ear Ational

this was a pretty decent battle here struture and vocab us bout even flow went to dex it read smoother here so heres the punch breakdown

twizted government.........shit it sounds like a club for sex
its like were playin his cd tha way everyone is hittin the dex
DECENT PUNCH LINES SHOULD HAVE BEEN SWITCHED WOULDVE MADE IT DOPER BUT GOOD 6/10
go back to lab and write betta lines, i didnt think u were so slow
cause dex's punches are bout as animated as his cartoon show
DECENT PUNCH AGAIN GOOD PERSONAL 7/10[B]
this battle aint a mystery by my skill remains a clue
no-one likes our government so whats that say about your crew
[B]HAHA ANOTHER DECENT PUNCH AND PERSONAL 7/10

PRETTY GOOD CONSITENT PUNCHES HERE OVERALL NICE DROP
20/30



IP:


So im a homo english fag? but HE be dressed in drag
Only get successful on the front of GAY Monthly mag
HAHA DOPE SHIT HERE LMFAO GAY JOKED IS PLAYED BUT THIS WAS WORDED REALLY NICE 8/10
Ational got plenty great male “friends” that stay at his place
Cant let him die without a “Will”, cos there sure aint a “grace”

OK I FUCKING HATE THAT SHOW I GET WHAT YOU MEAN THOUGH LIKE I SAID GAY JOKES IS PLAYED AND THATS TWICE AND THIS WAS WEAK HERE 3/10
Start beef with Korn or Slipknot, still wont have battles that rock
Even if you on fire, you aint hot, too busy wiv snap crackle and “pop”
I DIDNT GET THIS MAYBE IT WAS A PERSONAL YOU SHOUL EXPLAIN WAS KINDA WACK ANYWAYS BUT FIRST LINE WAS GOOD 4/10
Ear Asked for “friendly” beef, but I aint the laughing cow
Your verbally reduced to mincemeat, whos laughing now?
THIS WAS CORNY BUT I REALLY LIKED IT ANYWAYS LOL PRETTY DECENT 7/10
OK DEX ILL USE YOUR 3 BEST LINES SO YOU CAN HAVE OUTTA 30 ALSO AND YOU HAVE 19/30 PUNCHES COULDVE BEEN BETTER YOU HAD THE POTENTIAL TO WIN THIS YOU ONLY LOST BY ONE POINT ITS LIKE HALF YOUR VERSE IS REAL NICE OTHER HALF IS WACK LIKE YOU RUSHED SOME OF THE LINES DAMN DEX YOU SHOULDVE WON THIS BUT YOU SLACKED IN THEM LINES STILL I SEE MADD POTENTIAL IN THIS YOU MIGHTVE LOST BUT YOULL BE DOPE SOON IF YOU KEEP ELEVEATING BUT YOUR LACKING 2 BARS HURT YOU HERE WHEN YOU SHOULDVE WON

LINKS IN SIG PLEASE RETURN HONEST VOTES BACK

Ltizzle 02-05-05 01:54 AM

Voted For: Ear Ational

v/ ational

ya'll both mah boys on dis one, but honestly ational took this pretty easy...
dex you had some good ideas for your punches, you jus couldve made them better i think....some of em were kinda, eh i dunno....played out i guess?? they jus didnt seem very original....
your flow was aight for the most part, nuttin really special...
ational on the other hand...
very original and executed his punches perfectly.....
nice personals, really thought those were the best part of the battle...
again flow was aight for da most part, nuttin really special...
overall, battle wasnt dat great.....
Dex jus didnt come with enough.....elevate a lil bit, and id love to see a rematch though....


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