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K.I.N.G 01-30-05 10:36 PM

...{God Of Death}...
 
Flames ignite, when i write these non-fictions
Giving sight, to the blind with such descriptions
You say you dont take advice, well you fucken better
Cuz it's be nice to read "Mass Murder" as a News Header
Brain squeezin, Lungs Heaving blood out your mouth
Keep breathin, cuz your leaven this world without a doubt
Murderous thoughts, Emcees have Faught, but lost drastically
Fuck The Cops, These Pigs could not take me Sarcastically
Im Not Sayin that Im Not Slayin these Emcees to rest
But stay Prayin Cuz im Remainin the fucken God of Death


a little keystyle, hit me up for a Collab

K.I.N.G 01-30-05 11:08 PM

give some feedback...

kaveh 01-31-05 04:35 AM

line structure was aight...lyrics are tight for an audio drop, not sure if they meet the standards for text...but this could be improves and maybe maked it a bit longer...but the vocab was pretty nice..overall, take ya time on ya pieces more...keep droppin em

K.I.N.G 01-31-05 08:54 AM

thanks man, any more feedback

K.I.N.G 01-31-05 10:21 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1930700
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1930704

theres my 2 links


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