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Hells Fire 02-02-05 01:11 AM

Apocolypse topical.(lots of peeps liked so here it is)
 
yo thanx for the props give me some more feedback i was told this was a dope piece then that it was the best topical piece someones ever heard...



Intro
Earth is quiet, beauty is silent, matter of man violent
army is defiant, osama is tyrant, batter of man giant
usa went to war sounds of bombs filled terrorism sore
Bush commended then riddiculed for performance war
Korea blew up chemical attack by terrorist who blew up
thought it was us n enemies shot up fallout who glow up


Apocolypse
Buttons were pressed, millions were lost, mushroom cloud dust
Korea was stressed, shot missle as test, hit china billion bust
russia next messed, neighbor acid blest, india's turn nuke game o chess
nation left crest, of missiles in terror vest, anthrax dropped shame n mess
my legs are shaken, people are beacon, deaths toll not done taken
cancer lives taken, pyro hemisphere waken, air is biological quaken
cant shuffle thoughts, ace of spade thoughts, skin off like rust
cant muffle coughs, priest gave funeral blocks, survival a must
devils no love no lust, plagued dueteral flocks, revival set bust
My tears enrich soil, deep i depress n boil, cancer blest to toil
start was over oil, black gold killed homo, life set back in koil
why heaven let it go down, why wasnt peace and bliss found
why grim reap sis to ground, why devil kleave and shit round
end of earth, crust pealed showin poisoned fruit and all in dirt
judgement day came and went no shelter except government
starvation, vibration, malnutrition, no vision earth cries radiation
magnation, plaguenation, oni set tone cover bodies sedimentation
blood and land flow in cement, death grips souls traped in torment
emotion desolate non content, poetry spits end to happy lambnent
i have two contractions of lung left and no easy way out wit meth
i held the frozen baby as he smiled to death and i fell over context
epidermal flexed and acid rain cleaned my chest, blood n poison mixt
no more pain, no more suffer, i feel last strain n think of my lover
she died tame, before canibal buffer and innocent sent styx water
cough, cough, i bleed seein life before my eyes
cough, cough, i wish someone silence the crys
*heart contracts, lungs cave, eyes roll, luckey no one disturbed this mans grave*

hope yall liked it been ellivatin...ever want collabo pm me...now post some feed :spit: :spit:

Hells Fire 02-02-05 01:18 AM

yo heres my link

judicial....hide from life

Hells Fire 02-02-05 11:20 AM

uppin yo i know you seen it in ingenius but still gotta holla

Lil C 02-02-05 12:46 PM

dis was good overall,u need to up on da vocab a bit...good structure,wellbalance; hmmmmmm nice usuage of multies n wat not....good read tho keep it up.....7.5/10

Hells Fire 02-02-05 02:22 PM

uppin............................................. ...............

Hells Fire 02-05-05 01:57 AM

uppin for the people......................................

Kyleon 02-05-05 02:00 AM

yo i already told you dis shit was hot..and it still is hot...goos shit fam..hope to see alot more dope shit from you since we in da same crew..werd ~1~

Mix & Match 04-07-05 08:57 PM

This isn't really an open mic, technically this style of writing is spoken word.


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