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Its realitys spokesman the chief executive/ stop hatin mfers/ just let me live . from every rooof top/ to every mom and pop shop evil is non stop/ and kids are taught how to pop glocs / gats in they hands instead of eatin sum pop rocks/ shit has changed rearranged since i was that age/ and its strange cuz i can see evil in every mans gaze/ wicked ways womens bodies on display/ in these last days/ pathways to hell our lives resembling ash trays/
Burning the worlds turning / tell me where do we hide? / the pain is there in my eyes / so i sing sad songs like May J Blidge/ I FEEL burried alive/ under the weight of the plannet and i aint got a fucking thing to say to you damnit/
The Stock Market may fall but Hatred SOARS/ nobody loves each other look at the rate of divorce/ no remorse in mom's eyes she cries for herself/ she murdered all of her kids/ They were Crying for Help! / Reality lives in the words that i speak/
UNLESS YOU WERENT LISTENIN AND ALL YOU HEARD WAS THE BEAT.....
copyright 2002 Eric Edwards whose Pseudonym is Reality

yo im new (to this website) so yall gimme some feedback

flow wass good. topic was on. vocab wass good. and u got madd talent. keep postin im lookin to see more of ur shyt. uno

yo sinnacle i appreciate the nice review...now if i could only get out there right??? my mic voice is my best quality other than the way i write....

hmmm...was certainly a raw and hard hitting piece....very good 'flow'...and solid use of vocab...i feel what you saying most def....but it seems you have a talent to depict it better...while i usually go on some next shit (!!!)....but for real....some of the ish you saying is most definetly felt....like to see more from ya...from a different perspetive maybe or something...

...respect..