My Short Freestyle
 

VERSE:
check it...half of ya'lls verse's are pathetic
i joined the rap game and i'm so athletic
that more than half my lyrics are hectic
i spend most of the time to turn around and correct it
cuz i rap so i could get credits and collect it
i even go as far as looking in a dictionary
but atleast my raps aren't that fictionary
where i have to change the truth to make my flow carry
i've been hit, beat, molested, and arrested
but i make that money and invest it
so i have enough to get the best shit
and i barely know how to handle life
sometimes i wonder how it'll be with a daughter and wife
i act so spotanious and rap so good that it's dangorous
but i'm also caught up waitin'
for a job at a gas station and i got ta keep concentration
on how to make more money so i have enough to keep ratin'
and u gotta feel me on this one
cuz without rappin' there'd be no more fun

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