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Through The Eyes Of?
Silently Finish your Last cup or 5th Of Hennessy Moarning and Forgetting where your Essence Be Dispite how much u Scratch jus to Barely Survive You Recieve No credit for Sumthin in which u Thrive For that Child that Slowly.. is Passing from Cancer 4 That Abused Female that Results 2 bein a Dancer Glimpse through the Eyes of that Lonely Republican Eye in the Chamber of that one Publisher Whos Bout 2 Pull theTrigger cuz no one will Publish Em Through the Eyes of that Homeless Misfortunate Or that Dwarf who's Limbs seem 2 Reach Unportionate Through the Eyes of the Kid who doesnt believe in Jesus Or the Dirty Pastor Embellizing Money within the Church And makein you Believe if i dont Pay then "He doesnt Need Us" Through the Eyes of that 40 yr old Who gets Plastic Surgery Cuz her Husband is No longer Attracted besides his Splurgery Take a Moment to Glimpse through the Eyes of the Tyrants that Kid in the Back of Class wit Hiv..Who shows wha Fight Is Through the Eyes of The Woman who Tears Touch the Pillow Because of Drunk Driveing so now she is one of the Widowed Through the eyes of the Innocent who are Now in Time or Heaven Through the Eyes of those who Stared Down the Front Of that Plane that Came Hurdling Towards them on 9-11 *Nuff Said* This was originally a Poetry Piece But its gettin Slept on in the Poetry Section Knew it would get more Views here |
yo its good to see niggas still think shit out
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dis was real...i was mos def feelin it homie...seems to me you took yo time wit dis piece here...8/10...hot shit...return tha fava though, link in tha sig...~1~
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4sho ya
naw i dropped diz in about 10 minz |
this piece was nice.. u talked about some real shit.. vocab was good and u stayed on topic.. nd this line:For that Child that Slowly.. is Passing from Cancer
4 That Abused Female that Results 2 bein a Dancer.. definitly hit a little too close to home.. but keep it up.. 8.7/10 |
4sho ...i be on that real deep shit 2
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yo that was tight, i really feelt that shit.. would like to hear it with a beat, but thats some crazy poetry dawg
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4 sho............
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I would say that was one of da dopest i've seen from you fam...Nice structure shit was mad clean...Stayed on topic..Poetry was deep naw mean...Metas were used good in this drop hommie..vocab was in good use as well...nice drop
overall:8/10 |
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