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Young Mix 02-03-05 06:20 PM

Freestyle 101-Exclusively From My CD
 
Look man,dis rap proves dat dis is a jack move
and dese rap fools claimin they sick,but they all wack dudes
thinkin they gangsta wearin black tees and black shoes
well,Ill blacken they eyez til they'll be lookin like racoons
Im tired of dese rap dudes playin da same wack tunes
Ill have em like new releases, aint comin back soon
and dese niggas get a change of heart when I palm da gats
and dat'll straight leave a nigga wit a bigga screen than da Omnimax
Da fact dat yall spit it wack,got yall feelin dis nigga back
but I cant talk cause I contain a little bit of dat
My shit scare foes like a scarecrow
and you'll get hit wit more hammers than John Henry used on da railroad
Im on mils not no dolla shit
I neva spit fa free,1 verse of mine is worth more than a scholarship
I use dese bars in proper use,then pop da truth
while yall niggas is tellin more stories than Doctor Suece
Dont confuse yaself,in rap,aint no west wing
Im da best thang dat ever hit da air since da X Games
You wanna know how dat ten feel,nigga,Ive been real
Ive been ill since Master P's last album sold ten mil

Young Mix

Young Mix 02-03-05 07:28 PM

Gimme feedback on dis people,c'mon

villagepimp 02-03-05 08:04 PM

This was decent... I staid awake for most of it... lol

5.3/10

Since it's a freestyle I won't go into detail about it... but chea... I don't consider it CD worthy... even as a freestyle.

Young Mix 02-03-05 08:05 PM

Yo thanx dawg
More feedback please

villagepimp 02-03-05 08:05 PM

ah chea... leave feedback on the Breathe RMX ft. Anxiety & Indeph ... the links in my sig.

Young Mix 02-03-05 08:26 PM

I did
More feedback please

Young Mix 02-04-05 06:12 PM

C,mon folks,why is yall trippin,I need dat
so read dat and gimme some feedback

Parallel 02-04-05 06:59 PM

dosent flow good enough to go with a good beat, i dont get it eather

Young Mix 02-04-05 10:50 PM

Fuck dis mayne,
yall dont get da sequence I put my bars so Ima do some audios when I learn how to
But thanx for da feedback everybody


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