EyeDentdy vs Jay Kal
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 75

Check in by: 02-06-05 at 08:04 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

EyeDentdy has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 08:05 PM.

Jay Kal has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 08:34 PM.

I'll spit till U bleed like Im taking DNA samples/
Twist Ur helix back and make a smoothy out ur atoms apple/
Im skilled wit grapples, and techniques out ur limits/
analize ur blood like a nobel prize winning chemist/
U not on my level, It takes years of cannablism/
U too bitch, I'll make ur water break like an aneurysm/
Jay kals new to the expirience of the battling rapping family/
U as high as U gonna get, and its a long way back down to reality/
my metaphores attack nocturnal like Vampires/
U couldnt be hot like me if we battled over 5 ft bon fires/
Im a lyrical rapsody nigga, that'll stretch kats like car tires/
we could battle over barved wires,
but afterwords U finish puting up EyeDentdy Proof Flyers till the sun expires/

sorry I took so long, I had people over the crib and shit. but nothin personal, just battle.

wack cats like you stay deep in alleys/
Tryin to make a buck from a fuck wit yo pally's/
A K A fuck wit yo boy homey/
A K A take a chrome to yo dome homey/
A K A wearin foam til you know'm homey/
A K A keep em growin wit da bone homey/
Aight, enough of that dipset shit/
Bout to put a bullet through your mouth, and make you spit it back out your clit/
Your crew can be referred as a clique/
At least I think that's what a group of white girls in High school is/
I drop more laced lines than Rick James, you spittin like lines of linen/
What I mean to say is soft, call you Dracula cause all your lines are bitten/
I'll keystyle and not give a fuck/
you'll take an edited manuscript and hardly put that shit up/
I'll keep lyrically killin til I swig my last breath/
Ill steal your soul breath and body, might wanna call it EyeDentdy theft/
Yo you think this a game, but Im straight reppin G/
If you dream of winning this battle, it's about to become your final fantasy/
Yo this is the endin, and its established that Im wreckin/
I just slapped your record ass backwards, now you're workin with 7-11*/


*His current text record is 11-7

Voted For: EyeDentdy

V/Eyedentdy....close battle but he gets my vote he had more creative punchs an he diss's u consistently wit good structure....jay kal u had sum decent punchs in ur verse but u lacked on dissin him consistent an u need to work on sum more orginial punchs not so basic.....
punch=eye
structure=tie
vocab=eye
opener=eye
closer=eye
overall=eyedentdy
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Thanks for the feedback, Iv been gone for a few month so I was worried Id forget how to structurize my raps. but thanks. Iv got another battle pending wit Lord. Wun incase you wanna check that out too. I spit a lil better there than on this one. much respect to my opponent for spittin. keep elivating homie.

We need some more votes so we close this weak ass shit.

uppin

lets close this shit please. uppin for more votes

dammmnnnn is this shit still up? can I get some votes so I can move on with my life

uppin for some votes on this shit so we can finally close it. I dont even know if jay kal is still on this shit.

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Voted For: EyeDentdy

i voted for eye cus he had better rymes and they hit harder
and plus they had some flow and structure

jay- u were confusing with those lines but i got them , u didnt really ryme and poor structure got u

no hate
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thanx for the vote. this shits been open for almost as year and Im now finally starting to get close to closing it. I dont even rap like this no more. thanx for vote