Dominate vs Jay Kal
 

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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-05-05 at 12:50 AM

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Dominate has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 12:51 AM.

Jay Kal has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 12:52 AM.

I havent even spit yet, and I got this guy scared to say shit/
Rap battle of the century, Jay Kal, vs. DominatRIX/
How's a pimp gonna lose to a bitch in leather/
Dont worry I'll rearrange your intestines, so maybe you'll drop a lil better/
This hombre likes anal sex play with Males from strange angles/
Do-Mi-Nate, he's asking for it in his fuckin Rap Verse Handle/
This guy couldn't beat binary in a text battle/
So of course Im beating him like Atari without a paddle/
My rhymes are iller than leprosy mixed with biochem warfare assasin shit/
Your sickness so severe, you couldn't be cured by Jesus of Nazareth/

quick keystyle,

Jay a fellow man, nah this bitch makes hella plans,
n the teacher uses ur body as an example of a skeleton,
your spits-is-a-rage, i mean it in a bad way but kid-is-so-brave,
ima attach a shovel to ya head-n-leve ur ass long enough to dig-ya-own-grave,
screw you and your click, you wack but wanna pursue-the-shit,
ur gettin dealt but like 3 lille pigs enemy, u cant even move-a-brick,
think ur tight? but ur loose' like hoes, know that i boil spits,
u need to 'leave' ur 'shit' in the garbage like a 'homeless man wit no toil-let',
Since you Cant walk! ..what ya suppose to pivet!,
Failures cant Coach divisons, so ill grab ya eyes and choke ya vison,

uppin for some votes people.......................

uppin this battle...................................

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Voted For: Jay Kal

Dominate had a better overall flow, but he also had some dumb lines like:

your spits-is-a-rage, i mean it in a bad way but kid-is-so-brave,
ima attach a shovel to ya head-n-leve ur ass long enough to dig-ya-own-grave,

Jay Kal didn't have a good flow goingbut i liked his first two lines:

I havent even spit yet, and I got this guy scared to say shit/
Rap battle of the century, Jay Kal, vs. DominatRIX/

so i think i gotta give it to Jay Kal

This was feedback posted for Dominate