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Gansta Freestyle
I'm feel lost/
make your brain bleed out sauce/ this time is my time their know last result/ feeling gulity/ I make your mind feel all empty/ take your life away and remmber it as mamorizes/ assaintion/ killing people with half faces/ prostatition laying down on the ground to make payments/ the crazy thing about this world/ killing people after people every boy and every girl/ young people having babys/ sometimes I realized mybe my mind is going crazy/ I hope everything that I say is the truth/ chose the right path it will set you loose/ Ha tkilla is like no other/ as the way I freestyle can't nobody hold me down/ you can tell that my style is so tight/ I'm the one that killed superman with a cripdanight mic/ you think this rap game is an issue/ I'll burn your face up make you look like freddy kruggear with burn tissue halla |
im going to the top of the chart halla
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iight, im sure ppl were u live think dats dope but dis shit is wack as fuck, if u want sum gangsta shit jus tell me and i'll show u how its done son
0/10-up ya game nigga |
Ya just need betta structuring (like I told you) holla at me
Ok rhymins though |
i wasnt feelin it dawg...u need to really elevate...3/10
and if u think im hatin...im not...and RETURN THA FAVA ON MY OM's...links in my sig...get at me nigga |
Step ya game up, get off the gangster shit too, its aight ta use gun talk n stuff every now n then, but uhhh, you gotta use em too good effect, which you did not, but you'll come good, keep workin on ya flow
thats all i can suggest Peace |
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