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/\nightmare/\ vs gutter shad
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-04-05 at 07:43 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Gutter Shad has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 07:17 PM.
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/\nightmare/\ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 07:22 PM.
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I done took out Jason now I'm ready for freedy.
This nigga gay so he stay with the potroleum jelly. Call'em R Kelly, cause he like under aged teens. Fuck it this nigga probably fuck a crack phen. He claim he a nightmare but he sweeter than cake. Blew his brains from his frame now he fishing bait. Keep talking shit I'm ah leave you in the dirt. This nigga is drawed up like one of pharrel's shirts. The type to stay home jagging off watching peter pan. He like fuck a hoe I'm iight I got my right hand. I'm the raid cause people I'm battling a roach. The only nigga who LOL in everyone of his post. So he got me starting to think he kind of sweet. Battling niggaz on the web beating his meat. How you claim you a thug and you running with chumps. Cause you just got bust like a puberity bump./ |
ass couldnt get in a crew so decided to make one himself your nothing special, just another glass cup on the shelf that will eventually fall, crack, and then break your structures more outta proportion, then an upside down cake but the difference is, that those are actually good your profile says your trying to prove that you can rap,but you never could ya'll suck, its J.ust Y.our G.roup, and nobody cares (1) notice how you created a thread but hardly anybody showed there so give up, your flow is contracepted in its route by the hiccups im a tree, with leaves, filled with knowledge, your just a stump always left out, like the counting of fingers, being the thumb trying to be hard, selling crack that is congruent to tums just like a shad, your alwayz caught with my thrown hooks (2) and like a dirty gutter, noone ever gives your verses any looks hanging wit crooks, to try and prove that your tuff when the one you hang wit's, nick, name is crooked stuff your ability, is equal to mine...........when you times, it by two fool, you, shouldve knew, if you, wuz sherlock you, still couldnt get a clue your paralell to me, except im 180 degrees, in the opposite direction but notice how your skill level and my skill level are never intersecting need help wit my wordplay, yours are 1st grade, so push f1(3) like a prostitute's clit, after completing a sucessful trick, you done. 1. his group name is junk yard gang 2. a shad is a fish 3. f1 is the help button wordplay=dont understand, dont vote ^theres more then just that explained^ |
^yeah, i kicked your ass, admit it, HAHA, now get off my fucking nuts, and stop talking shit, this is finna be a straight knockout.
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Voted For: /\nightmare/\
diz was a hands down one sided str8 up but here it goes: opener: nightmare vocab: nightmare punches: both personals: nightmare multis: nightmare closer: nightmare nightmare just came harder & every line of his came direct; gutter shad u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes, & expand in ur wordplay so next time u can win da votes |
Voted For: /\nightmare/\
nightmare took dis easy he came hard punches and persnals stuck was a bit of flow was 2 but punches and persnals cracked me up a little funny shit good v erse he came good gutter came alright had a few weak persnals didnt do much punches were ok but didnt hit to hard flow was rite stuck was off just need a little elevation nightmare wins this easy came harder he gets my vote easy |
thanxs ya'll, uppin this battle...................
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You pussy nigga shut up and let the peeps vote! HAHA that trick
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On some gangsta shit uppin this.............. .............
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This was feedback posted for Gutter Shad
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Voted For: /\nightmare/\
nightmare had this...i woulda voted gutta if his verse stayed as hott as tha beginnin of his verse...but it fell off...hard...but nightmare i liked yours fam...your punches was in overall...betta...urs flowed betta...structure was betta...n ur opener n closer was better |
Voted For: /\nightmare/\
ok gutter good flow here dope flow but punches and disses really wasnt there for you they just aint connect disses were also weak here cuz they werent personals if you aint gonna use a punch you should at least diss your oppenant well vocab was ok could be better 4/10 nightmare good flow also some lines a little streched but good shit here nice personals and superior punches got you this one fo real vocab was good also as was the multis which helped so your shit flowed better in some places 6.5/10 |
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