upfront vs DiZeE
 

Battle Rules:

16 bars or less
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-08-05 at 12:30 AM

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upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 12:31 AM.

DiZeE has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 12:50 AM.

they call u upfront cause thats how im servin u up close and personal , they call me dizee cause im goin to leave u raped and twisted u might be kinda gifted your soul bout to get lifted shifted and shit in , dont know how long u goin to take how many lines u goin to make more shit u make more reason 4 me to call u fake just like your style u probly been in this sight for a while but im bout to leave u abandoned like a deadly vile hopfully u got a ok style now that im here never goin to stop flows never stop wit a clock more shots than a glock shittin on u like a flock of birds wit deadly words leavin u soak and wet cause im spittin deadly verds

iight,,

les go dis nigga dizee from all the shots he took at the neck/
how u gunna come on a site and face me u guarenteed no respect/
u less experienced cat wen u walked by my "fagdar" started to detect/
i should bring ya weathered ass down to earth wit my doppler effect/

s0o u can spit all u want but battlin me was jus a dumb mistake/
wit one movement ill put ya lights out like birthday cakes/

gettin hoes dizee is the only way this nigga get pussy,mayne he relentless/
my dick deals wit mo mouths than a fuckin dentist/

u couldnt touch fire and become hott/
nigga id jus throw ya cd off my house and make ya album drop/

tha dope flo have yo ass sayin ohh no /
have ya shit twisted then ud start to feel like a homo/
battle me can leave y0o ass froze like fuckin eskimoes/

one las thing ill put shells on ya feet like adidas shoes/
n if that dont work ill rearange ya face like arubic cubes////


~peace~ vote on it thanks

Voted For: upfront

this battle goes to upfront becasue
he had better structure
harder punches good vocab and he had great multis
dizee u need to work on ur structure and ur vocab
ure drop was alright yet u need to improve it
upfronts favorite lines:
gettin hoes dizee is the only way this nigga get pussy,mayne he relentless/
my dick deals wit mo mouths than a fuckin dentist/
u couldnt touch fire and become hott/
nigga id jus throw ya cd off my house and make ya album drop/

ay people can u please return tha favor
on my batlle vs. topspit

np uppin uppin

Voted For: upfront

punches-up
persnals-up
flow-none
struc-dizzee
vocab-up

upfont easy got this...punches were harder had a few personals bit weak but yeah he had some dizzee came weak had a few weak punches not worth it though didnt prove him good up takes this easy

Voted For: upfront

structure was tha main reason in this one. dizea, ur structure was wack, and i also wasnt feelin yo structure, upfront, but u came harder. u had some nice punches and wordplay, but some lines seemed a lil play'd. no hate tho, just elevate in originality..
dizae,ur structure took it away, tha worst i ever seen. i seen no wordplay, no punches, no good vocab, i just think ur verse got off a lil simple...no hate tho, just elevate..

overall-upfront got this one by far...no hate...he just had a better overall verse...

plz return tha vote favor on battle link in sig...pick one, and plz make it xplained fully, cause i took my time out to vote on this one and explain it...

~1~

uppin thanks keep em comin ~peace~

uppin..... uppin uppin uppin

uppin uppin uppin

Voted For: upfront

upfront took this plain and simple.

upfront had good structure, good flow, some allright punches. some personals, a little bit of wordplay and multi action. and he came across pretty hard.

dizee you basically just wrote a paragraph. no structure at all, to hard to pick out aflow or anything this way. you gotta fix your structure and make out your lines into bars.

v/ upfront

return the favour, link is in the sig

Voted For: upfront

DiZee-
just like your style u probly been in this sight for a while but im bout to leave u abandoned like a deadly vile
^^best bar......... you need to fix your structure tho.. you had some aight attempts but you shouldn't bunch up your verse like a paragraph..

Upfront:
u couldnt touch fire and become hott/
nigga id jus throw ya cd off my house and make ya album drop/
^^best bar and best bar in the WHOLE battle.. this was a nice punch lol... both you had an aight flow, but upfront i feel you came harder and had better attempts and concepts of punches, that's why you win this battle... this is pretty one-sided perhaps a KO... stay up..
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