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Here To Stay
Wrote this to Fabulous:Think Ya'll Know chorus(1x) Its Assas-Sin,and im here to stay Legend in da makin,What else to say Yall no me,Naw most of yall bitchmade Katz actin tuff,but sweeta den lemonade Its da newera,So RV listen up Verse #1 Its Happening nigkaz,Assas-Sin roamin da blocks Muthafuka you aint speakin,Cuz ya no im clappN da glocks Hommie im hot,watch it before ya get rock with semi Not false avatizing,but who betta den me to rock a hemi Famz im on fire,not banks but ya know im hungry 4 more Me,im on da streetz sellin bootlegs before it hit stores Mic in my hand,Flow crazy son,Do da math im way to genius What rapper ya know acts like this,Talks like this with a rap like this I aint stoppin till my pockets stay swole like AC Slater Me disappearing from da rap,Nope not goin cuz im da mayor New katz hit RV up with ish to speak,Beef to eat Come my way wit herb talk,ILL introduce da heat Its Assas-Sin bitch,So keep in mind dat im never slackin Trippin wit da bluntz im havin,No wonda im dope at rappin Peep game yall,Dis kid just beginning a new legacy So you can duck and hide,Or stand up and walk wit me chorus(2x) Its Assas-Sin,and im here to stay Legend in da makin,What else to say Yall no me,Naw most of yall bitchmade Katz actin tuff,but sweeta den lemonade Its da newera,So RV listen up Verse #2 Actin tuff,Dont make me get outta line like retired actors My game aint a Late-Show,but ya know its a Fear Factor Twizted Government excepted,Now its my time ta shine Im dat kinda nigka to say hello,Den show ya da glocknyne Me personaly,I luv yall dont wanna be hatted anyway Gimme space,Im find till ya approach me in da wrong way Think ya'll know my style,Touch me and see how da fist react Switch ta being one of da rookz,Ta merkin day lites outta katz Yall no were im at,so come see me and cuz i aint budgin a bit Talkin all dat shit,Im bustin down 'em doors lettin shellz rip Rearrange ya whole uppa lip,so peeps no who kiss da clip Yeah homeboi it aint a game no more,Yung but in a grown stage Check out da pricncess cutz on da jacob,Looks like da Stone Age Get it,Im sik wit it,Mention my name betta be around nominations Cuz I said it before Assas-Sin aint goin no were,Here ta show da nation.... chorus(2x) Its Assas-Sin,and im here to stay Legend in da makin,What else to say Yall no me,Naw most of yall bitchmade Katz actin tuff,but sweeta den lemonade Its da newera,So RV listen up |
i think its a really good drop
im really feelin it i like tha structure and the vocab was terrific id give it a 9/10 really good drop return the favor |
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I am a big fan of this peice indeed brother.
DAMN! some real good lines. I loved these two: "I aint stoppin till my pockets stay swole like AC Slater" "Famz im on fire,not banks but ya know im hungry 4 more" there were a lot of good lines but these stuck out. Your structure was good, your flow was way cool. Vocab nice. Only quarm, (please take it as constructive critism) is that during the second verse, it seemed to drift a little of the quality of the rest and got a little less enjoyable to read. If you just threw in a couple lines like the two above wud have remedied that. But it was cool. 8/10 |
^aight Thnx Dex And Godfatha For Ya Honest Feedback...still Uppin For This To Be Nominated...~1~
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8.5/10, good wordplay, structure was hot, chorus was a lil' u know especially that lemonade line but this is hot
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^^thnx...still uppin for nominations and feedback....
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Uppin For Some Feedback
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uppin for feddback...
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leave some feedback sitaz...
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uppin this for feedback and nomanations...
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dam, can the man get some feedback? lol
nice drop..some heat right there. i got 99% of it cept for this one line here. Quote:
^^^ i know who ac slater was, but what this mean? u mean swole as in muscular or his pockets were swole? im lost...holla.. good drop though... 8/10 |
HAHA^^every gets that line but i guess you dont..well like ALOT of moeny in your pocket..i aint stoppin till my pockets stay swole like AC Slater..so really what im sayin is IM NOT STOOPIN TILL I GET ALOT OF MONEY IN MY POCKET...get it now....swole as in big bucks...~1~
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i get what your saying...but whats the meta?
my pockets are swole like a.c. slater...meaning your pockets stay swole like ac slater stays muscular?... |
yeah...AC Slater is musculur..musculur = swole....pockets stay swole like AC Slater..AC Slater swole..get it now...
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