gutter shad vs Invektive
 

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6-8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-05-05 at 03:01 PM

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Gutter Shad has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 02:32 PM.

You 5-0 get ready to be 5-1.
You short black with a fro so call you Gary Coleman son.
I'm here to let you know that you's a gay hoe.
Girls suppose to throw panties at you nigga not tomatoes.
I can imagine how you look breath smell like fart.
You got the Simpsons on the side I'll leave your head like Bart.
Beef is at my door nigga I hear it knocking.
The only time you in hoods is when you watching Robin.(Robin Hood the Disney Movie)
And your chicks a bust flying coast to coast.
Your future is just like the dudes over the number of your post.(Look at the guy over the number of his post from the simpsons. He's a school bus driver sorry forgot his name)
So pay attention in Drivers ED, we know that you give head.
The type of nigga to be found Up in Mike Jackson's bed.
Something new comes out every time that I rhyme.
You would of been better off if you had just hit decline.

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 02:53 PM.

if I said Gutter Shad was skilled........i prolly had plenty of sedatives in me
cause your talent level is lower than your money on hand.....negative fifty
dawg, stop overrating yourself....your skill level...when i first started i passed it
claims he a "top free agent"....nah, no crews wanna experience your wackness
you not livin in the hood......stop frontin.....we all know you stay in the suburbs
i mean...how many people actually own a computer and live in the "gutter"????
Shads gay, in many mad ways, whos a top free agent and sells theirselves to crews
if he actually thinks he'll become a member of the elites.... this dudes confused

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oookay uppin fo votes!

uppin for the win..................................

Voted For: Invektive

if I said Gutter Shad was skilled........i prolly had plenty of sedatives in me
cause your talent level is lower than your money on hand.....negative fifty
decent punch, kinda weak though
dawg, stop overrating yourself....your skill level...when i first started i passed it
claims he a "top free agent"....nah, no crews wanna experience your wackness
decent punch
you not livin in the hood......stop frontin.....we all know you stay in the suburbs
i mean...how many people actually own a computer and live in the "gutter"????
kinda weak here, wasn’t feelin it though…
Shads gay, in many mad ways, whos a top free agent and sells theirselves to crews
if he actually thinks he'll become a member of the elites.... this dudes confused
decent closer, nuttin much though

You 5-0 get ready to be 5-1.
You short black with a fro so call you Gary Coleman son.
wack…
I'm here to let you know that you's a gay hoe.
Girls suppose to throw panties at you nigga not tomatoes.
punch didn’t really land here
I can imagine how you look breath smell like fart.
You got the Simpsons on the side I'll leave your head like Bart.
played punch here, seen it b4…

*Nice copying .K.onflitz font Invektive…

but anyway…Inv took this one, came harder than
g.s. and the punches landed here…

g.s. elevate more, those punches were played and…weak

^^^^aright thanks for voting.........uppin some more

uppin dis shit............................... ............

Voted For: Invektive

gutter came too soft for this battle, i think u shoudlve came a lil harder with punches and metas and all that othere shit. i wasnt feelin ur structure, i think u should elevate in that. but u did have a good attmept at wordplay
invektive, i wasnt really feelin yo flow either, but i think u came harder in this one. u killed him wit yo personals and shit, but i think u should still elevate, and come more original...no hate, u got skillz. yo structure was a lil off too, yo lines seemed wierd. but whatever, i think u took this one...

plz RTF on one of tha battle links in tha sig, and make it explained, cause i took my time out to vote on this and explain it.....thanx


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Voted For: Invektive

invective took this hands down...

punches/ personals: Invective
metas: Gutter Shad
wordplay: Gutter Shad
multies: no1
structure: invective
flow: Invective

GS: ur verse was ok...u had punches...and ok metas...but ur flow was off and u lacked personals...

Invektive: FIYA...u had a personal in every bar...ur flow was almost flawless...and the few metaphores u did have were good...despite all the good things about ur verse...it was ur personals that won it for u...

v/ invektive

yo thanks for votin.......favors will be returned......................

Voted For: Invektive

punches-I
metals-I
persnals-I
struck-I
flow-tie
multis-none

I wins this easy....he had better everything good alround very gutter ur just wack and "overr rated"

Bitch show me I'm wack and over rated. Don't come on my fuckin battle thread tryinn to hate on me because peeps says I have what it takes to be the best. U R gay as hell blitz!