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dOpEbOi 210 02-05-05 05:34 PM

LC...open mic
 
i rip tracks, like hulk hogan do his shirts
stab niggas wit spoons so dey can feel muh hurt
feel my pain, i been grindin fa yea's
n i aint neva turned my back on a friend or a peer
u niggas is queers like mista musau-hadeem
im Poppadeux's, u niggaz is kid's cuisine
aint no way u fuckin wit my team
i shine like a fo'head fulla orsheem
ask dem niggas in da bricks bout me
my nigga two-time as big like james avrey
fo-fo, we in da do' like do' knobs
u otha rappas kissin ass n givin blow jobs
lookin fa record deals, u wouldnt sign yaself
no otha rappas gettin hyped like myself
im steady bangin dat 3rd coast
like shoota mcgavin ill eat yall niggas fa breakfast...ull b toast
im spittin barz like fire
da industry bumpin my shit, now dey callin me sire
im reppin dat Lucky C
its Lil'Q, yung-ro, big Pluck, Moke, Riddla,K-ross...n D-O-P-E...
yup dats me...


meaning:
shoota mcgavin-nigga from happy gilmore who said he eats pieces of shit like u for breakfast


gimme feedback niggas

dOpEbOi 210 02-05-05 05:42 PM

uppin fa some feedback

dOpEbOi 210 02-05-05 05:58 PM

feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed-me-back niggas

Kyleon 02-05-05 06:28 PM

i didnt like your structure...but ya flow regained my respect for you 4realz...wordplay was very nice..pretty goos shit fam...

overall:7/10

return da favor on my open mic and nominate it...link in sig...


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