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Theres only one girl in my life
Shes so kind,sweet,a perfect lover to be a wife
people always have to start somin wit her
they just hate her cuz shes one of the best
they say names to her,
not posed to be effected cuz she couldn't be tested...
thats y shes against all odds n shes above The Rest..
each time when i see her my heart feels warm
each time when i dont get to see her my heart feels torn
it may feel kinda awkward buh its tru
your the one for me n i love u

this was ok but u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes, work on ur structure, & go into depth wit ur poems 4 future references ight overall it'z a 6/10 u'll get there ova time keep up the good work

Agreed^^, i thought it was cute for what it was, but i was waiting for something more to happen that caught my interest, just keep dropping and elevating, it will come..1