Song For God......and The Battle
 

These are the lyrics i'll be using in my battle....what do ya'll think











See god i know that you'll always be there
And god i know that always will care
And when i shed tears because you shed ya blood
WHen you died on the cross and rose above
Yea and now that i feel your presense
I'd never wanna go back to my past
And i'mma prey to you that this will last
Just knowing you died on a cross for my sins
I love you so much where do i begin
ANd i know this task wont be easy
I'll go throught pain and i'll through teasing
And I'll go through love and throught weeping
Life now i gotta live it right.... for you christ
So when i die i see the light
See you made me not scared death
I feel your presense in every breathe
I wanna draw closer to you in every step
Draw closer to you in every step!


God Now I found the peace
I'd get right down on my knees
And thank all that you did
All you did for me


now that i've been following your paths
Doing everything that you asked
Hearing all the jokes and people that laugh
None of that will hold me back
I'll praise u at home and in the public
i talk about u they ask for an other subject
See one day every knee with bow
And in this world there will be one crown
And this one wont pierce your brow
When i die i'm gonna kiss your feet
Look up see the light and the golden streets
Heaven the place where everythings perfect
Were around the corner there no evil learkin
Get up to the kingdom it'll peacfull
All is good there can be no evil
And i'm still waiting for your sequel

hmm this is ok, pretty straight forward nothing to tech or surprising.
This is a good topic, you should come more original,These lyrics are predictable, when you think of this topic,this is exactly how i thought the lyrics were,which isnt a good or a bad thing.
Its just....if this is gonna be audio,wouldnt you want to surpirse the listner and leave them like ......hmmmm this drop made me think,you know?

any way just my view.

it's alrite u religious???