~Da_Illest~ vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines..
3votes=tko
No Crew or hate Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

lets go fam

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 02-07-05 at 12:46 AM

Must drop verse in 160 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

~Da_Illest~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 11:58 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-05 12:15 AM.

here we go check-it yeah Pure Visions........

let the fighting erupt, this kid must b delivering testicles cuz he's driving me nuts/
i'll cut out marvjay's insides just 2 prove that when battling me ur deprived of guts/
nigga i'll stump ya back in & wit verbal punches from me i'm crushin' ya spleen/
u grabbin' this win..please i'll cut ya hands off so jay won't b clutchin' a thing/
only time u write ya text thru is when u send ur ink thru ya paper/
shit i'll kick jay in his pussy & kill the undeveloped eggs like dim incubators/
like an injured Chris Webber there's no way J gonna spit bullets at me/
even when i stand still & u go up a flight of stairs you're still 2 steps behind me/
damn man u don't even look developed, how microscopic this pubis seems, ur sodomy is soon 2 b/
ur like a verb but the difference between u & otha 1's is they end in an action, u'll just end up in an eulogy

look......

see often im hott,how u a pimp fam aint no whores by ya cock
you dont get HEaD only time u "got-blown" u "LOSE By aLOT".
so fukka stop,ya ass aint neva clutch a glock,i'll bust a shot...
& do like a "clumbsy babi w/ a passafire" ima make dis "sucka-drop"
im bein sarcastic rv if i was da say dis 'dude's ryhmes nice'....
how u da da illest u 0-3 plus lose 2 dat newb PHiVE twice.....
you so weak,been merk dis whole week so dont speak fagget!
and fam just cuzz u 21 years old dont mean u got OGSTaTUS
lucky you dont do audio's sofukk it u dyin by da text.......
u a think da illest won a "ncca" how he stay "cryin by da NET"


3rd bar=he lost da dat mc PHIVE twice and he's 0-3
4th bar=his old name is OGSTATUS and in his profile it says he 21 years old

dont get nun of my shit dont vote

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

jay, not bad nothing spectacular but ya punches were
delivered better, although i did like da illest's opener more then yours, but he fell off quite a bit after his first bar...
so for better structure,punches n complexity marvjay
gets my vote.........
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vote marvjay

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Marv
Came Way Harder In The Following Categories Punches, Meta's Structure, Vocabulary, Seems Like You Was Focused On Getting This Kid And You Got Him Punches Was On Target And Multi's Was Decent, Personals Got Em, Nice Play Of His Ish, Over All You ad This

Da Ill
Yo You Need To Elevate On Your Flow, Like Fix Up Your Structure An d Everything, You Need Help With Vocabulary Also, Coz This Ish Is Gettting Whacked, Personals Could Help You In This Battle, Also Try And Add In Some Multi's Here

OverAll Marv Got This
Aye Return The Favor Link In Sig, Return It On The One Me Vs Death Nuff Said One