Vicious Attack!!!!
 

check it out, the supreme verbal delivery// a masterpiece, similar to shakespear's poetry// got thee ability// to revolutionize society// like karl Marxs' sociological ideology//
my personality// consistently. release that hott shit//
Hazaaam be spittin' it, in ur face, while other niggaz drop straight bull shit// this shit.. yo, consists knowledge in abundance// dont ever come at me.. cuz i strike hard with a vengeance// hence it won't be a coincidence// when i strike like napolean at ur residence// without showin' any hesitance// since, thee assassin be assassinatin' the so called eMCee's// like spreadin' the AIDS disease// consequently deceasing the enemies// let me release the vicious lyrical abilities// which gives light to the human beings like the sun//dont make me bust some verbals at u like a gun// Hazaaam the chosen one// crazy son of a gun//
punish niggaz for fun// disfunction bitch niggaz' ability to process locomotion// even the deepest ocean, cant stop me from inhalin' oxygen// i consider my raps to be dangerously intelligent// relevant to great philosophers propositions// hazaaam be embarkin' in missions// to conquer the other civilizations like the european imperialism// then dictate the land followin' a political philosophy called fascism// punish the gay niggaz who show traits of feminism// my rap ideology be structured perfectly like a prism// so.. listen, niggaz can't question my rap specialization// the rap nation needs to sink the previous statement in to ur brain, cuz my superficial rap notion is like drinkin' magic potion exact opposite of drownin' in the atlantic ocean!!!

i wasnt really feelin this one....
its nothin against you its just that you cant come off hard flowin about socialogical ideology

rap is grimey....
this flow sounded like it came out of a college textbook. anyway keep spittin and elevate
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hahahah.. ur right.. i just felt like droppin' some knowledge..

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was gud but some elevating wouldnt help jus keep doin ya thing.
holla @ mt rhyme http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=17560

aiight... uppin

i love usin big vocab but only when it makes since to do so ....theres are a few okay lines...but keep droppin.. ilike punish gay n--- who show traits of feminsim/

aiight..

need feedback!!

This reminds me of when I was just learning how to rhyme... I wouldn't call it a vicious attack...and spittin' knowledge comes off with a topic/story feel. This had words that rhymed that didn't have a purpose to enlight someone...
keep spittin'

X

A coo drop...Madd Vocab in This...Some nice lines in there...keep elevating

yea... thanx for the feedback halo...

yo, xodus,, whatever fool... i bet i'll shit on ur bitch ass..

uppin!!!!

try then. :)


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let's do it then...

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