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Hammer 02-07-05 08:01 PM

Hotshh! vs Hammer
 
Battle Rules:

8 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 02-07-05 at 09:01 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 02-07-05 08:03 PM

Hammer has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-05 08:03 PM.

System 02-07-05 08:04 PM

hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-05 08:04 PM.

Hammer 02-07-05 08:25 PM

How many years you been studying medicine?
no life in ya verse, even if it was shot wiv adrenaline
Wanted me to drop in 30 minutes, what is this?
Spend too much time at the clinic, cos all you drop is shit!
You say you’re a rich bitch but in reality you poor
cos u “shit on people” –your words, and you eat off the floor
The fact is, you say you wanna slap newbies for practice
Well have this, only time ya bitch gets a prick is from a cactus
Your insane in the membrane, thinkin you’ll have me slain
Wen your only claim to fame, is you never changed ya name

N.Tavarez 02-07-05 08:42 PM

no hammer disses...too easy




Look.. How you want it? Im here to bring the Battle you Ordered
Your not a Leader....Your a Follower and Cattle Get Slaughtered
Fuck the odds of me winning this gamble...igga Im Blind Betting
Plus Hammers punches fail to connect... like phone calls on 9-11
He need to elevate.....but i aint the stepping stone to Boost Him
He Cant See Me ....so he went and took his eye out like Houston
But as far as text goes kid..Chingy wouldnt let you Ghost for Him
Look.....Ya fucking Trash the site'll Crash if you ever Post Again
Shit......Those Lines will NEVER hold weight on an Infinite Scale
They're Less Useful......than a Porno Tape to an Impotent Male
.................................................. ....................ANd Im Out

N.Tavarez 02-07-05 08:43 PM

no hammer disses...too easy




Look.. How you want it? Im here to bring the Battle you Ordered
Your not a Leader....Your a Follower and Cattle Get Slaughtered
Fuck the odds of me winning this gamble...nigga Im Blind Betting
Plus Hammers punches fail to connect... like phone calls on 9-11
He need to elevate.....but i aint the stepping stone to Boost Him
He Cant See Me ....so he went and took his eye out like Houston
But as far as text goes kid..Chingy wouldnt let you Ghost for Him
Look.....Ya fucking Trash the site'll Crash if you ever Post Again
Shit......Those Lines will NEVER hold weight on an Infinite Scale
They're Less Useful......than a Porno Tape to an Impotent Male
.................................................. ....................ANd Im Out

Hammer 02-07-05 08:46 PM

good verse bro.

good luck.... uppin
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Kyleon 02-07-05 09:05 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

v/hotshh! because he had betta punches and had betta flow with his structure...hammer your shit was sorta choppy and punches landed weak...personals lack in your drop also...elavate a lil and then battle some one that elavated...no hate just sayin da facts..~1~

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.Ike. 02-07-05 09:07 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

hotshh.......
Look.. How you want it? Im here to bring the Battle you Ordered
Your not a Leader....Your a Follower and Cattle Get Slaughtered
nice opener....hit good..

Fuck the odds of me winning this gamble...nigga Im Blind Betting
Plus Hammers punches fail to connect... like phone calls on 9-11
9-11 punches are played....this one had a nice twist to it though

He need to elevate.....but i aint the stepping stone to Boost Him
He Cant See Me ....so he went and took his eye out like Houston
nice

But as far as text goes kid..Chingy wouldnt let you Ghost for Him
Look.....Ya fucking Trash the site'll Crash if you ever Post Again
lol.....hit nicely....good bar here

Shit......Those Lines will NEVER hold weight on an Infinite Scale
They're Less Useful......than a Porno Tape to an Impotent Male
nice closer....hit good


Hammer..............
How many years you been studying medicine?
no life in ya verse, even if it was shot wiv adrenaline
nice wordplay here.....hit nicely

Wanted me to drop in 30 minutes, what is this?
Spend too much time at the clinic, cos all you drop is shit!
ehh decent....

You say you’re a rich bitch but in reality you poor
cos u “shit on people” –your words, and you eat off the floor
decent.....

The fact is, you say you wanna slap newbies for practice
Well have this, only time ya bitch gets a prick is from a cactus
ok.....hit decent

Your insane in the membrane, thinkin you’ll have me slain
Wen your only claim to fame, is you never changed ya name
good personal....nice way to close it out.....



overall- i felt that hotshh got this with harder hitting punches and more complexity......hotshh also had better structure....personals probably went to hammer....but hotshh's punchs overpowered that......vote goes to hotshh for harder hittin punches

N.Tavarez 02-07-05 09:37 PM

3's Ko so lets finish this now....................

MaRVJay 02-08-05 12:06 AM

Voted For: hotshh!

easy win 4 u fam.....i aint see no personals from neither of ya'll...but

opener-hot nice opner u had a betta ryhme scheme than hammer..
structure-a tie
punchlines-hot
creativity-hot
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-nun
finisher-hot
enjoyed-hot....no im not a dick ryda i vote honest nahmean hammer u would of had a chance if u with some personals cuzz ya punchlines were weak step ya shit up fam...hot overall u had a solid verse nice disses u win dis easy ya shit was more consistant

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINK MY SiG

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blitz 02-08-05 03:09 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

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Look.. How you want it? Im here to bring the Battle you Ordered
Your not a Leader....Your a Follower and Cattle Get Slaughtered
ok punch it was good
Fuck the odds of me winning this gamble...nigga Im Blind Betting
Plus Hammers punches fail to connect... like phone calls on 9-11
i liked that like a little
He need to elevate.....but i aint the stepping stone to Boost Him
He Cant See Me ....so he went and took his eye out like Houston
it was ok not to good
But as far as text goes kid..Chingy wouldnt let you Ghost for Him
Look.....Ya fucking Trash the site'll Crash if you ever Post Again
nice little multi there
Shit......Those Lines will NEVER hold weight on an Infinite Scale
They're Less Useful......than a Porno Tape to an Impotent Male
humm not very good last line was ok
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How many years you been studying medicine?
no life in ya verse, even if it was shot wiv adrenaline
it was ok bit weak
Wanted me to drop in 30 minutes, what is this?
Spend too much time at the clinic, cos all you drop is shit!
ok way to much about clinic and stuff weak
You say you’re a rich bitch but in reality you poor
cos u “shit on people” –your words, and you eat off the floor
little try of a multi weak still
The fact is, you say you wanna slap newbies for practice
Well have this, only time ya bitch gets a prick is from a cactus
WEAK
Your insane in the membrane, thinkin you’ll have me slain
Wen your only claim to fame, is you never changed ya name
another try of a multi dindt quite work WEAK

well shh got this hammer ur weak need elevation shh came harder than ny of hammers lines was wweak as fuck by hammer

Khaos_daRenegade 02-08-05 03:23 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

yo this was an ok battle but both could have came harder but my vote is for hot basically cause hammer killed himself he didnt have any punches or at least not any good ones no personals or multi's hot had a few multi's a few aight punches no personals had a little vocab so that why u get my vote return the fav http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174845

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Sik Wit It 02-09-05 04:25 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

Look.. How you want it? Im here to bring the Battle you Ordered
Your not a Leader....Your a Follower and Cattle Get Slaughtered
7/10 nice punch...it landed + it was hard

vs

NOTHING

This is one-sided
hotshh! took this one..punches were harder and it all connected Hammer ur drop was okay, just elevate more, cuz ur punches weren't really hitting & all, but it was aight though

no hate...

Armada Da 187 02-09-05 06:09 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

Neither one weas to good in my mind, ya both slacked

But the vote goes to Hot

Reason:
Hott out of the verses seemed to have the stronger one his was way more to the point n his punches was stronger

Hammer ya came a lil weak doesnt look like u really gave it ur all ya had good flow n good wordplay but ya gotta get heavier on ur disses fam

Both of the verse was a lil wack to be honest im suprised at both of ya, I know u both can do way better fo sho

Breakdown:
Punches- Hot
Flow- Tie
Multies- didnt see any
Personals- Neither
Structure- Neither

Vot goes to hott

return fava Fams

Holla


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