Acuity vs Crimen-E
 

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Check in by: 02-11-05 at 04:05 PM

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Crimen-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-05 04:06 PM.

Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-05 04:08 PM.

Sometimes it's hard to deal with Idiots/ this b!tch is no exception, he prolly raps with half the shyt-he-spits/ but then again shyt's all he has subtract any-wits/ But I guess his past put in his @ss many-Dents/ in any inccident, I'm glad it happened to this skinny-BItch/ Ac-U-ITY, please don't make me laugh, u a veteran/ But it takes Inginuity, to have what takes to be a better-man/ or to be better-than, anyman/ for that matter, and for that matter/ U can't spit worth shyt, must be your half bladder/ U couldn't step to me with a step ladder/ U a crack-addict, and I can still but yo @ss to sleep, nigga I'm that-maddick/ fact-added, I've put niggas in addics, and now I'm back-at-it/ and u the first to suffa the wrath/ and don't say I aint neva done nothin 4 u, cuz I just gave you blood bath/

Voted For: Acuity

In 12lines ill blaze ur drop, which will use unlimited played rhymes
This is a toilet your verse goes plop,mine smells like roses and shines
pretty good closer, punch landed…6/10
Crimen-E is mentally deficient, never kick a spit thats lyrically tight
To rap his mind insufficient, he cant even drop a link from open mic
decent punch, nice persona to it…good flow 7/10
Kid needs to back-off, before he gets bitch slapped and looses his sight
I dont look when I jack-off, after lyrically rapin dis herb i cud cum in his eye
this punch was okay, kinda off but aight though 6/10
Who is this RV guest, whos attempting to place my rep under duress
I came wid my military uniform pressed, he turned up in his sunday dress
pretty decent punch line here, punch was on point 7/10
Needs to step back, go home and fix his horrible verse structure
Its like he's high on crack,verse full of holes, but still drives with the puncture
lol, good punch here, nice persona to it…8/10
Crimen-E at fault, Nigga thinks he's fly well her comes the air assault
I've eaten this herb, but hes undercooked, pass me the table salt....
decent closer, 6/10

Crimen-E: I don’t know what was that there though
Your structure wasn’t good, didn’t see any punches
From you, and ur flow was a little off, overall you need
To elevate way more if u want to win battle…

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Voted For: Acuity

Stop beating on newbs lol.

Who is this RV guest, whos attempting to place my rep under duress
I came wid my military uniform pressed, he turned up in his sunday dress
I came wid my military uniform pressed, he turned up in his sunday dress
Needs to step back, go home and fix his horrible verse structure

VS

Sometimes it's hard to deal with Idiots/ this b!tch is no exception, he prolly raps with half the shyt-he-spits/

Vote Aucity for having better structure and more punches.

PS please return the favor in my sig thanks!

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Voted For: Acuity

my vote goes to acuity.

crim...
you had some nice mutiles and your flow was alright. please try to work on your punchlines and your personals. you hardly had any....and the ones that you dropped werent that nice. sorry, no hate bruh. also, your structure was horrible. try hitting the spacebar after every line (basically every half bar). you have potential......so im looking forward to better drops from you in the future. hold it down cutty.

ac...
nice drop brutha. i've seen better from you, but this will work. you had some nice disses in there (hahaha). the punches and personals were sufficient.......they did the job......and entertained me as well. you had nice structure too. if anything, work on your flow a little bit and try to up your vocab a little bit homie. once again though, nice job.
p.s.- ac, its too bad you didnt take me up on my offer. goodluck anyways though, word.

keep up the good work fellas. one love...


...the super....c.s.

Voted For: Acuity

acuity took this hands down


crime - ya structure was wack, ya flow was all over the place and you had no punches worth talkin about so basically very poor drop

ac -

Who is this RV guest, whos attempting to place my rep under duress
I came wid my military uniform pressed, he turned up in his sunday dress

^^^thats my fav line, original and funny

ur verse had gud structure and a nice flow, the punches were average really but were EASILY gud enough to win this for ya, nice shit


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thx

Voted For: Acuity

Eh i can only laugh at Crime-E's verse man your structure first of all is probably the thing that nobody likes and its already just makes your verse that much worse not to mention your elementary vocab and played punches, Acuity not a bad verse you had some punches i aint really liked seemed kinda forced with the links put in there not a bad way at tryin to get personals though, your best punch probably
"Crimen-E is mentally deficient, never kick a spit thats lyrically tight
To rap his mind insufficient, he cant even drop a link from open mic"
Overall Acuity took this with better structure and more up to date punches with more creativity My Vote - Acuity