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Untraceable vs Hot Sauce
Battle Rules:
SM vs Code Steel 10 - 30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 02-12-05 at 09:45 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Hot Sauce has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 09:50 AM.
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deepthroat so much ure BLUE-IN-THE-THROAT, jus for a FEW-OF-URE-VOTES,ure not supposed to 'play wit DeAtH' but ure CREW-IS-A-JOKE/
explode ure LIVER-N-SHIT,BITTER-N-QUIK, droppin garabge like u LITTER-U-PRICK, u could ''SUB-SCRIBE'' ure verse to ''VIRUS'' n still not DELIVER-IT-SICK/ Untraceable ? im SWEARIN-THIS-THUGS-GAY, its SCARY-IN-SOME-WAYS, cuz u lose 'weight around SUBS' jus like JERRY-FROM-SUB-WAY/ ure FEELIN-THE-HOT-SHIT, leave u SQUEELIN-N-COUGHIN,TEARIN-N-SOBBIN, as i 'dign up dirt on death' like im STEALIN-A-COFFIN/ change up looks like i av sum brutal thoughts to ~MESS~WID~ ill be messin wid u's more than michal jackson ~CARESS~KID~ i dont no wat ya dick ~LESS~DID~/ stickin dildos in pre ~SCHOOL~ASS~ in a sick fantasy that ya a teacher of a ~CRULE~CLASS~ u been smokin too much ~FOOL~GRASS~/ I'm ~REFINED~IN~DECEPTION~ so ~REWIND~THE~AGRRESSION~ otherwise no-show or pray for ~DIVINE~INTERVENTION~/ I'll ~INSCRIBE~YA~WITH~SECTIONS~ from all ~THE~ ~RHYMES~THAT~I~MENTION~, battle me 'head to head'? my ~'MIND'~IS~A~WEAPON/ i use mine to rap u use urs to ~STRIP~YOUTHS~ dont get mad cos im givin u trouser ~ZIP~TRUTHS~ damn im rippin u all u shud stand in ~RIP~BOOTHS~/ it just makes it less hastle ~FOR~ME~ to giv ya a lesson a ~HARDCORE~DEGREE~ dont piss wid this ~RAW~EMCEE~ crew battle sm vs cold steel |
Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 08:07 PM.
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this kid says he is so hot you cant drink him* musta been in a dif mind state or jus not thinkin cuz the only way he will be a myth or a legend* is by adding a loss to his record within seconds thats a lesson learned cuz ill leave sauce burned which will turn COLD STEEL into ashes inside an urn concern the leader with another loss on his side so get back to the kitchen where ya bitch ass resides* everone run for ya lives because hot sauce is now here but when thats said not a single person dissappeared cuz aint no one feared of a sauce thats really not hot the only thing hot on this bitch is the pussy spot damn hot sauce did i just reveal ya SECRET identity better be expecting it to have been revealed eventually and the only way you are gona be as cold as steel* is when ya freeze up dropin, like lyrics are a big deal *one sig says "so hot you cant drink me" *subtitle says "A man, a myth, a legend" *hot sauce is found in the kitchen *another sig says "cold as steel" |
uppin...lets get some votes................honest and explained :thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for Untraceable
Just checking the pollz...HS's drop was made ssttrreettcchheedd
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This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
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Voted For: Untraceable
Untraceable - Good drop man. You had a perfect structure there that flowed nicely. Your punches owned Hot Sauce, and you had a good amount of personals that just made him look like shit. Tight drop man...8/10 Hot Sauce - Aight man...structure was way off man...made your verse hard to read. Your flow was eh...could have been better thatn what it was. You had some good punches in there but they didn't land nearly as hard as Untraceable. I don't think you came as hard as Untraceable in any way in this battle. Elevate in making a better structure for your verses man. Allright drop....5/10 Vote: Untraceable |
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