Dabatos vs.
 

checkin in give us a topic and hopefully dabatos is gonna see this to topical...because px just said in complaints its going down

check..................

px pick a topic

Ink on Paper
 

hand grabs the pen, feather hits paper when
mind stabs the aspen, bark retreats graspen
the pen bleeds my mind, feathers word feeds the mind
slow motion like play rewind, seein thoughts print so fine
the blood so thick it shine, verbal scripture from shrine
words comin from the heart, each beat writst contort
minds driftin thru visions port, boat resembles my part
diggin deep in the soul, my mind barrels the roll
the ink spills lifes message, no bottle still on crests edge
in between the line voyage, black ink smear whites edge
my spirit in structure, like skin deep i puncture
veins life i rupture, releasin lifes strain n pressure
i wain for pleasure, tears hit page no composure
energetic thoughts in entropy, pen compose life symphany
poetic grace resembles melody, hittin page n flow in syncly
forte so words are felt, exclamation point delt, showin black felt
showin scar like lifes welt, energizin lines felt, structure tac belt
eye lids swell liquid hits paper,focal points dwell on vaper
skin gone showin epids layer, speakin father and oh savior
confession on sins nature, all she said was please nurture
i made her bone rapture, scitzo break and seaze lecture
sent life last dinner, all i was givin was pen n paper
thinkin fast n thinner, didnt think id die ten in paper
with my last line spill my own ink on the pulp
with my last line spill with one wink n the gulp
drip, drip, drip... blood n ink make a master piece
drip, drip, drip... blood n ink on my papers piece


i dunno about this one how youll in terpret...but it was good for in a half hour

well hope ur verse is good..i ain't reading it yet till i post mine cuz then i run out of ideas if i read urs...so good luck

yeah you too man...i just need to keep writtin then ill get good again

I can't believe you no-showed... Now i can't merk you.

Wow, this is disappointing.

Hells Fire wins due to no show.

CLOSED