unfinished rap - preview
 

im wrkin on an instrumental right now an am wonderin wht u fink of these lyrix so i kno how to improve dem, if dey need any or not....... take yo time an drop a reply.......gud or bad....dnt bother me- jus b str8
(........startin bit..........true story)






Since the age of 2, had to deal with complications
Nearly lost a father, life saving operations
Tryna make it on ma own - Not alone from situations
Flickin through ma raps - Changin radio channle stations
Tryna find the key - To flee from misery
People runing our life causin this insanity
Single mother of 6 not much money to feed
Living from the gov - Aint much money for me
Now i tred in this life, learned to be more wiser,provide her
Not letting the hardships divide her

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It seems a little basic and although the words are yours it doesn't quite seem your hearts in it. If this was really your life, pull the emotion straight from your heart and the memories straight from your mind. Check out my poem "diamond in the sky and you'll see what i mean. peace

Sorry by the way it's in poetic scriptures not in open mic, looking forward to more of your text holla

sfe seen.............my raps in poetic scriptures or ures???

......dat woz jus like da breif startin of my rap, da emotion , i decided is gunna cum frm da center of ma peice..........dats kinda like a startin summary, if u kno wht i mean............by da way , nice AKUMA PIC, U INTO STREET FIGHTER...HEVI GAME AKUMAS ONE OF MA FAV CARACTERS LOL ANYWAYS TNX, AM OUT ~1~

sfe seen.............my raps in poetic scriptures or ures???

......dat woz jus like da breif startin of my rap, da emotion , i decided is gunna cum frm da center of ma peice..........dats kinda like a startin summary, if u kno wht i mean............by da way , nice AKUMA PIC, U INTO STREET FIGHTER...HEVI GAME AKUMAS ONE OF MA FAV CARACTERS LOL ANYWAYS TNX, AM OUT ~1~ ... sos dat woz ma oda account lol....da one abuv