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intensify effect vs *troop*
Battle Rules: CREW BATTLE: CODE STEEL VS S.M
12 lines... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no feeding... CODE STEEL IS ABOUT TO OWN S.M WE 1 WIN AWAY FROM KO'IN YA CREW BITCH!!!! Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 02-10-05 at 03:57 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 05:16 PM.
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CODE STEEL MOTHER FUCKER..... RESPECT US BITCH...
..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless... ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris.. troop ya punches couldnt be "hot" if u "burnt-ya-fist" im bugg'in?, i have yet to "Tear-a-Ris" ya like a "Muslim Extremists" my punches'll leave u to grow fucked up on Rv like a retarded Fetus, N if this win was a walk down the block, u'll struggle to crawl like a parapalegics... N like lowis lane im glad u'r here to get the scoop cuz u'r like a news-reporter in iraq, still not yet concider a TROOP.... LOOK, S.M bound to fall like a avalanch call from mother nature... and i maybe AMP, but u'r only shockin when ya set off ya pace-maker..... BITCH.... CODE STEEL BITCH... WE GOT THIS..... |
*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 01:53 AM.
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Stop ya Ignorance Ya Not in the Sindicate Your Simplify Reflects Slowly Mixing RedBull..... and Bacardi still wont Intensify Effects Your not Gifted believe me ya Battles are Poo ya Drop Tells Mishandeling Egg Cartons is the only time u Dropped Shells From the Check in you was Nervous Basically Rippin ya Nails U defeat Me? Ya when Anerexics Finally start Tippin tha Scales I.E Recycles other Lyrix he might as well start 2 "Lease Raps" Ghandi on a Me vs U audio Still wouldnt make "Peace Tracks" Believe Me Rv knows ya Lyrix are Shit i guess u Rhyme Bloated U cant See Me .... like Jogging thru an Intersection Blind Folded You got Jr Freeze on His Knees 2 Please so u hittin High Notes This a Misbalanced Battle like 300 Pounders hittin Tight Ropes ...Nuff Said that Bitch... |
Voted For: *Troop*
Troop Stop ya Ignorance Ya Not in the Sindicate Your Simplify Reflects Slowly Mixing RedBull..... and Bacardi still wont Intensify Effects nice opener Your not Gifted believe me ya Battles are Poo ya Drop Tells Mishandeling Egg Cartons is the only time u Dropped Shells aight From the Check in you was Nervous Basically Rippin ya Nails U defeat Me? Ya when Anerexics Finally start Tippin tha Scales decent I.E Recycles other Lyrix he might as well start 2 "Lease Raps" Ghandi on a Me vs U audio Still wouldnt make "Peace Tracks" coo Believe Me Rv knows ya Lyrix are Shit i guess u Rhyme Bloated U cant See Me .... like Jogging thru an Intersection Blind Folded coo You got Jr Freeze on His Knees 2 Please so u hittin High Notes This a Misbalanced Battle like 300 Pounders hittin Tight Ropes coo clser pretty coo verse...it flowed very smoothly...punches were hittin...had a little vocab and some good multies...good creativity also...nice verse...8.5/10 I.E. ..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless... ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris.. lol...nice opener troop ya punches couldnt be "hot" if u "burnt-ya-fist" im bugg'in?, i have yet to "Tear-a-Ris" ya like a "Muslim Extremists" this aight...nothin special my punches'll leave u to grow fucked up on Rv like a retarded Fetus, N if this win was a walk down the block, u'll struggle to crawl like a parapalegics... coo N like lowis lane im glad u'r here to get the scoop cuz u'r like a news-reporter in iraq, still not yet concider a TROOP.... lol...coo LOOK, S.M bound to fall like a avalanch call from mother nature... and i maybe AMP, but u'r only shockin when ya set off ya pace-maker not too good of a closer you had an aight verse...u had a couple of lines i liked...your punches hit solidly, but u lost it in a couple places but still decent...some good multies...u had a little creativity...flow was kinda off in some spots...but still decent verse...8/10 pretty close battle... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
return the favor please...................feedback or somthin
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175611 |
...............And u thought u was gone Merk Who?
Not Troop *Nuff Said on this Clown* |
^^^ bitch u pre-wrote that, u ducked my first set up just to give ya-self some more time to drop....
fuckin lames with they pre-writtens make me sick.... keyed my shit in 10 fuck that verse took u 4 days...... nuff said.... upp'in.... |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
nice battle Ie very close battle word.............
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upp'in............................................ .............................
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No Pre Written Needed
Im jus overall Better than u Thats tha diff between a Vet and a Clown wit 33 losses like u Now realize U been Exposed sorry Bitch *Nuff Said on this bitch that keep Jockin Me* |
upp'in............................................ .................
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*
meh....in SM just upping...good luck troop........
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I dont need luck...skills speak 4 themselves
*Nuff Said* |
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