|
*Love Note*[~Lisa Anne~]
My Love Note:To Lisa Anne Hook(X 2) Girl, Can No Other Girl Love Me Like You Bright Smile, With The Eye's Of The Blues Don't Be Confused Baby I'm Here Now So Dry Your Eyes, And Put On That Smile Verse One The Prince Of Queens, Met His Princess From Delaware I'd Listen To Your Dreams Coz That's How Much I Care And I'd Do Anything To Always Make You Feel Special If Ever You Had Your Down Fall I'd Be There To Catch You Your Beautiful Smile Glares, And You Think Oh So Sweet I See It In How You React You Try To Be The Best You Can Be Forget full And Clumsy At Times, But I Think That's Cute Girl If You Want Like New Life We Can Start From The Root Even If It's Me And You Against The Whole Wide World It's Love I'll Be Here And You'll Always Be My Baby Girl Hook(X 2) Girl, Can No Other Girl Love Me Like You Bright Smile, With The Eye's Of The Blues Don't Be Confused Baby I'm Here Now So Dry Your Eyes, And Put On That Smile Verse Two It's Amazing Ba-by How You Always Keep On Loving Me The Girl That Changed Me, And Know My Past And His-tor-y Your Style Your Smile, Girl It Just Make's Me Feel So Weak Baby, You Fine From Your Head To Your Feet, I'm Now Complete That's Why I Love You, And Baby I'll Never Let You Go You Feeling Weak, I'll Make It Better Kissing You From Head To Toe I Know We've Bin Through A lot Of Shit Together Baby Girl But I Promise I'll Do What II Can To Make It Better Baby Girl Your Eyes, Your SmileAnd Your Lips Just Hit's My Sweet Tooth From The First Time We Hooked up I Knew I'd Never Ever Leave You Hook(X Fade) Girl, Can No Other Girl Love Me Like You Bright Smile, With The Eye's Of The Blues Don't Be Confused Baby I'm Here Now So Dry Your Eyes, And Put On That Smile Link One Link Two Link Three |
Alright, Emotion is there. Upp your imaginary.....Describe how fine she is....Upp your vocab....good flow.........Creativity needs some elevation too
Overall good drop 7/10 |
Lol Alright Cool, But This Was Just An Emotional Concept Not Me Describing How Fine She Is Coz |
it was pretty dope......i liked the way you talk about the girl...but advice..dont say tha girls name :-) and wordplays good..and the vocabs...ok...
7.5/10 |
Alright Cool, Why Not Say It Though??? |
Man I Feel This Handle Ya Biz But Get A Lil Desciptive Add More Word Play...keep Elevatin...iron
|
yeah i am feelin this...just dont mention a name...your flow was good...the only thing that could make it better is make it longer fam...good shit...
return fav fam http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1948909 |
Thanks For The Feed Man, I'll Return The Favor, Upping For More FeedBack On This Piece |
Upping, Upping Upping... |
Fuck You All Then................................ |
Bumping THis............... |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:52 PM. |