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encrypted7 02-10-05 10:48 AM

rhyme structure
 
this scenery is seemingly the same path folk
i take aim and red dot ya brains bashed folk
without telling a joke i quote how ya life so comedic
me wettin you up during the lick like the same pussy you eatin
knowledge im feedin to the judges cuz ya lines they aint readin
your truths we aint seein you smelling like Europeans
know im off the deep end, illusions and all of ya words shallow
my tips hallow points of exit where you used to take swallows
follow me my leadership make hoes who make money
spit game spit flame makes hoes and take money, ya big dummy

Mentor 02-10-05 03:08 PM

yo u have the talent and the multi's but u ain't got the vocab u really good think it out more sure it rhymed but make sure u put shit in there that makes sense too so i'll give this 5/10...elevate

Dirty Nigga 02-10-05 04:05 PM

Wasnt feelin this at all........................

dont even know what ya trynna rap about half the time, step ya game up

Peace


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