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Adrenaline vs Dolla-Bill
Battle Rules: 8 - 16 Barz No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No dickhead lickin (d/r) and no beef or hatred now lets get dis rematch goin... :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-13-05 at 01:16 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Dolla-Bill has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 01:17 PM.
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Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 01:30 PM.
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adrenaline is buzzin from tha rush of me poppin back up so fast...
like tha recall of his ex-boyfriend playin wit his ass, (you a fag)... i see da matrix lines aint work out in tha past... but dis is da remix and im "reloaded" but im breakin my neck to shoot at ya ass... u last in dis race so i got a chance to shit and piss on ya pen and ya pad... go sing a battle to somebody cuz yo rappin lasted for only minutes like a white man fad... im sick of rappin now so i'll end on a different note... ya fat momma sung and yo daddy gone so now you always rappin "why" like jadakiss wrote...(nigga) BUT WAIT...THERES MORE!!! im gone spit eight more bars to waste time for tha readers... adrenaline is now shook up like defenders in And1 sneakers... unknown legend wit illmatic lyrics? nigga please... take rappin off yo agenda, you'll make more money on ya knees... cuz u obviously high off shrooms cuz weed aint neva made a nigga think... dat i wasnt comin harder than cum do in ya e-y-e... im cuttin dis nigga more than houstons suicide attemps... after dis battle his name will be forgotten like it was shawn kemp... |
uppin dis battle through tha roof...and where u at adrenaline???????????????...scurred?
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This kid calls 'imself DOLLA-BILL but he lacks~MONEY,kinda funny,the way u rap aint ill u WACK~HOMEY
when I GRIP the mic my flow SPILLS,I smack~DUMMIES,u aint an OG,I'll KICK ur ASS so dont act~funny-- Im a CONTENDER u dont want to mess~with,shit gets HECTIC when I have a TEK spit u a PRETENDER that nobody wants to get~with,bitch u rep~shit-- I'll MANSLAUGHTER ur whole PERSONNA if u step~to~me,the rest of ur IMAGE will be left as HISTORY my shit's HOTTER than a man BURNIN inside with LEPRACY,I'll COOL u with a BEVERAGE if u invest~in~me-- check it nigga,ur BIRTH was a MISHAP,so with~that taken into consideration u should quit~rap MOTHERfucker get~back soon as I spit~raps,cuz if u dont u'll see TERMINATION faster than a ROBOT-- Im more FORENSIC than SCIENCES,CLIMAXING constantly like a storie's PLOT I'm more~ANTIQUE than APPLIANCES,even IMAX~is jealous of my viewer stock-- u a KNOCK~OUT~KING? then go ahead and try~so I'll make u hop~out~da~ring,using unfamaliar moves like "tai-bo"-- This nigga says he "Already~had~bread" so he thinks he's outlastin please...ur already~half~dead u should elope to the "outkast~in"-- I make niggaz reach their MAXIMUM CAPACITY cuz battlin me is actually wishing damage~to~thee u should think b4 u talk savagely~b,im desperately set to staggardly man~handle ur free's-- u spittin AVERAGLY im spittin HAGGARDLY,so dont get it twisted like SCARY~MOVIE~III... as a matter of fact i'll make u change ur whole name ur whole game is wack cuz u aint got no~aim/ it's obviously clear the reason ur here,cant u see~it im an MC and ur trying to be~it,but all u can do is dream it... how much was that I dont even know... |
yo sorry about not postin earlier...I had to go to class...
I like ur last 8 LINES,the shawn kemp one is true lol what happened to him *shrugs*lol...anyways barz consist of 2 lines...u spit lines I spit bars...now u know dat... and I've definately elevated yo..dat ^^ took me like 20 min... |
Voted For: Adrenaline
this battle was all da way 1-sided thru out: opener: adrenaline multis: adren vocab: adren structure: adren punches: adren personals: adren closer: adren dolla-bill u should elevate in ur rhymes more & get str8 2 da point with ur lines; adren gets my vote 2 win |
Voted For: Adrenaline
Aight for overall content Adrenaline got my vote The bars an punches much more consistant, opener was more creative than dolla bill too, closer goes too dolla, but still, like i said overrall content goes too adrenaline Dolla, ya verse was tight in plcaes, gotta have consistancy an some of your shit seemed forced, but alls good, keep up the rhymes, enjoyed readin em... good lookin out y'all, Adren gets my vote peace |
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i feel u cuz...i was rushin wit da 1st part...tha second part was what i took time to write...and yeah, i didnt know dat bout tha bars and tha lines thanx fam...its no hard feelings...lmao...you did elevate :thumbup: and thanx to all who took time to to vote and shit...its cool...thanx |
Voted For: Dolla-Bill
tha only reason im votin for dolla is cuz dem last 8 lines i dont care what yall may think but if he jus had dem 8 lines instead of tha 16, yall would vote for da nigga too and dats 4sho |
to riot...dont tell me that dolla-bill pm'd you cuz I know u in his squad...and the only reason im accusing u is because that vote made NO sense...c'mon...anyways It's all good..keep votin peeps...
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naw...i aint PM him...and yeah...he is my fam (my cuzzin)...but a vote is a vote, right?...uppin
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Voted For: Adrenaline
another battle to make me want to shit in my pants adrenaline got this cuz of personals his structure was off because he tried to get in too many punches and then the punches were nuthin special dolla bill nuttin was wrong it was just that his lines were wack as hell structure was ok punches -200 personals -100000000000 |
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